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August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! That was sooo freakin funny!!!
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*claps-wolf whistles-screams for more* I live in sydney, Australia. It is 4:00 am in the morning. My partner is asleep next to me and I have just scared the crap out of him because I am laughing SO hard at your fic. This is BRILLIANT! i LOVED IT! Definatley a recommendation. :)
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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty funny. Good work.
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This made me snicker, LOL XD cute
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Intresting concept and funny.
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i must say that was different!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was marvelously funny. I really like it!
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Udderly brilliant!! *bows* I bow to greatness!
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this, it\'s very funny.
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I was a very prominent writer on the site, When it was still young, and up to two years ago. Today was the day I gor back to reading fanciction, and as many writers then used to ask help and give advice to other writers, hears some critism:
Good: The ideas, concepts and the straightforward manner of speech.
Bad: the manner of telling. You may want to get a beta reader. Your characters need more emotion.
Anyway, I wish you luck, as it is, even with the bad, your fic has indeed made my day.
Good: The ideas, concepts and the straightforward manner of speech.
Bad: the manner of telling. You may want to get a beta reader. Your characters need more emotion.
Anyway, I wish you luck, as it is, even with the bad, your fic has indeed made my day.