rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

amazing. I\'m just in the middle of a break from studying the digestive tract for my Anatomy and Physiology test and I decide I need to relax a bit. Your story was the one I had open in the \'to read later\' list and it was the first I tried to read. Small world, isn\'t it? (And we never got such great assigments...)

oh just beautiful! it\'s all i can do not to burst into tears (i don\'t think tears and laptops work well...) congratulations on the fine story.

So, I have just read the whole of this story from beginning to end and am now sitting in my computer room (Spare room actually! but computer room makes it sound like I live in an actual house and not a shoebox!) with tears running down my face, and, I\'ve run out of cigs dammit, due to reading/chain smoking combo.

That, my love was fantastic, and I swear to you that if you don\'t write another one soon I will take Sev off of you for good, Yes I can do it!!

My favourite bits (If you are at all interested!)

Your cringe inducing description of the effects of the Cruatious curse.
The idea of a whole wizarding family living in hiding in the muggle world
The first kiss (I am at moments a hopeless romantic, so shoot me!)
\"Busted\"
Vampire ex wife (God how I love a vampire)
Very disturbing dream (I got a bit scared, well it is Halloween!)
Hermiones resolution to do the right thing (That\'s my girl!)
Vam wif wife no 2 (See vampire ex wife)
and of course the beautiful ending which has me sitting at a computer in the house on my own, crying like a baby!!

Love ya
Kisses
GrrArrg

P.s I\'m glad you and your team got a high mark, In my opinion well deserved (not that my opinion means much *lol*)

Congratulations for you and your group,BTW I regret that cannot see the show,especially pupets(wide field for imagination,I presume).

*dons festively bright party hat, and opens vodka*

Well done my dear, a result like that could not fail even to impress our dear Severus!

Have told you what I think to your ... um... face... screeen... sign in name, and as am chatting to you now, shall conclude this hasty entry,

*exeunt stage left, shaking her thang..*

Daya.

Woohoo! I knew you were brilliant!

OMG!
That... was... EXCELLENT!
And very sad - That was such a heartfelt chapter... did you cry when you wrote that?! *hands over box of kleenex*
*eats tissues* mmmm... good stuff!
Wow... that brings it all to an end...
Loved this, loved it loads... as did the wok - mmmm... Alan induced climax, eh? heeheehee!
Oh well... you and me should go stalk Alan sometime! lol

ciao,
Fish

Oh by the Gods! I weep and weep and weep. That is the most romantic thing I have ever, ever read! This whole story was fabu! (Sorry it\'s taken me so long to find you, but I have only recently discovered fanfiction. Pawn to Queen was the first I have ever read.) Thanks again for your reply to the prologue of Travels With Severus, by the way. I can see that I have much to aspire to after reading Hepatic Hex. Wow. You are now on my list of faves.
Take care of you. I need a Martini. Grey Goose, here I come!

Hero

OMG! You made me cry, actually cry with what Hermione did. The way you wrote it, was so moving. Wow. Wow. Wow. I have to go blow my nose! Can\'t wait to read the next chapter, which I will once I dry my eyes.

Titania