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for The Hepatic Hex

by shemhamforash

person huntergon
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just love this fic......(and i must admit, i learned lotsa stuff about the bladder).
person Daya
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Thats all I can say. No flip comments, no sarcasm, just an appreciation f fin fine piece of work that is worthy of any praise that is bestowed upon it.

I\'ll admit to sobbing helplessly while reading it too. You got their emotions so perfectly, and to allow them to both die with dignity together...

I am truly in the presence of greatness.

Daya.
person Lady Aidil
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It was the awesome royal end,I was utterly impressed once more and now I simply want to thank you for your splendid writing work with hope you`ll create a new story for my and other`s true pleasure.Many hugs and let us,the readers,see you again as a writer.
person Lady Aidil
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your merciless evil is killing me,I`m simply dying of impatience and waiting for this damned epilogue,yet I`m getting the vampire mood too and want to struggle the writer because of her last chapter!LOL It was truly wonderful as usual I admit so I`m convinced that the end would be the same level and probably as surprising as the rest of the story.My opinion hasn`t changed,not at all,I was engrossed and enthralled once more reading the new installment today.Thanks for such an intersting and originally-invented plots and well-written characters.
person Alia
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*tears* That was so sad. And how could Artemis go for Snape when she perfectly well knows that Hermione is in love with him. Arranged marraige or not, I sure wouldn\'t be that happy about betraying my friend. Arrgh!

Post...SOON!!!
lia lia
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My dearest darling Shem,
I hate you...
Ok, thats not true but what a place to leave a story. This is soo good. So very, very good. I really don\'t know what else to say...besides UPDATE....NOW!! Ok, thats not fair, update when you\'re ready, but I will be waiting with bated breath. I remain yours, with...
much love,
tigress
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, dearest Shem, I loved it. It was wonderful, and for all my begging for Snape/Hermione lovin\', it really didn\'t fit in to the story. Your instincts were so on. Can\'t wait for your next story. As always,
Much (MUCove,ove,
tigress
person Kiristeen
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH, yes, a most satisfactory ending! : ) ::sighs:: tragically romantic. I thoroughly enjoyed the ride -- frustration included : ) -- and eagerly await any new foray\'s you make into story land.

And as to your bribe . . . an extra chapter of Triumph will go up today. I\'ll try to get one of Mother\'s as well, but I don\'t even have that one first drafted yet, so I might not get that one up until the morning.

You like any pairings other than HG/SS? I write/am writing several, though I tend to stick with the mains.


Kiri
person Pixi
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Will have to admit that I just sat here and read the entire story in one sitting. Gods woman, you are cruel at times! I really enjoyed the story. And the ending was very bittersweet. Hope it goes over well as your assignment. You may want to have someone go over the final product to fix typos and any grammatical errors that occured just in case and just so that you get the very best grade. You deserve it. I have to admit I adore snape and granger as a pairing... and draco and hermione as well. Keep up the good work. Hope to read more from you in the future.
person Fish (not signed in)
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"Hark! I hear the shower running!\" Fish yelled over the horrendous noise the old shower made. She pointed in the direction of the bathroom, Shem\'s ears pricked up as she listened carefully.

She heard a sensly sly silky voice singing... the sound was rather arousing, though the lyrics were rather morbid for her liking... considering WHO the owner of the angel\'s voice was...

\"Love\'s the funeral of hearts and an ode for cruelty, when angels cry blood on flowers of evil in bloom.\" The voice enveloped her and she began floating, on a small cloud, towards thehroohroom door where they voy voice emanated from.

\"Have fun, Shem!\" Fish yelled after the wonderful writer before buggering off to go find Alan Rickman and worship him in the middle of the street for just being Alan Rickman... publicly embarassing or not.

*~*~*~*~*

Can\'t wait for the Epilogue, Shem! *passes Snape-on-a-silver-platter*

ciao,
Fish

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