rate_review Reviews

A very complex and intriguing plotline. : ) I\'m enjoying reading this quite a bit. I can\'t even begin to imagine how this would affect wizards as a whole! devastating, I\'ll bet.

You mentioned this being something pla plan to turn in as an assignment -- cool way to do it! -- I was wondering if you wanted readers to mention the kind of typos that a spellchecker wouldn\'t catch? (Not that are many)

Kiri -- looking forward to more of the story

your story was wonderful.it was a change from the stories i have read.i would love to know if your going to write more for it.please e mail me if you do

nice start

might want to fix a few spelling errors before you hand it in.
I hope your tutor likes being a HP character now. :)

keep up the good work, look forward to reading more of it.

Dear ShemHamForash:

Thank you for scinscinating story! I don\'t know how many readers will follow you through the technical material, but I did (physiology minor quite a number of years ago).

It\'s like a detective story: we have the \'body\' (the symptoms), now the actual condition must be diagnosed before a cure must be found. Most often in my writing, I\'m doing the same thing but in the forensic psychology field.

I love the relationship between Hermione and Severus; his tenderness is touching if a bit OOC at times. Hermione is, well, herself, and that\'s great.

Please continue this great tale!

Blessed be,
Dame Niamh