rate_review Reviews

Ooh. Very nice. :)

I\'m typically not one for het fics, but I adore Lucius, and he\'s one of my faite ite characters in the books, so I read this just out of curiosity.

I\'m glad I did. The greenhouse scene was nice, and very erotic, and well written. I like how you\'ve taken the time to develop the seduction. Granted, his options are limited and she would normally never be to his tastes, but you\'ve overcome that hurdle well.

I look forward to seeing Lucius bring out Hermione\'s dark side. Perhaps she\'ll end up enjoying the enchanted manacles in the dungeons. I certainly hope so. ;)

Keep up the good work!

Love it! Keep those chapters coming!

OH MY GOD! That had to be the best written set of lemthatthat i have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please you HAVE to update soon.

I can\'t wait for that next chapter! I\'m sure it will work out just fine.

That was great! I love how you lead up to it by eroticizing their work in the greenhouse.

Wow, you must have put up chapter 8 just as I was reviewing chapter 7. Anyway, great chapter! I thought the greenhouse was a nice touch, dungeons are good too, but a bit much for the first time. Maybe later;-) I\'m looking forward to more!

oh my god oh my fucking gawddddddddddd that chapter had me turned on and waiting for more why did you stop please keep writing and maybe write longer chapters i cant wait to see what happens next you are the best at writing lucius fanfiction so far i cant get enough dont stop until your finished write me love hugs kisses luciushoar.

More house points for you! If you aren\'t in Slytherin, you shoul.
T.
This is a wonderfully wicked and well written fic that just keeps getting better. I think the pacing of this story is just right. Lucius is correct this will and should take time.
If chapter six is any indication we your readers have a lot to look forward too. At this rate Hermione might need to indulge herself as Lucius has before too much longer.

Boy! Lucius has jerked off every time he gets near Hermione or sees her from afar. lol I guess that\'s what happens when you have an attractive woman roaming around your house and you can\'t do anything about it yet and your a horny man. *grins wickedly* I love the way this story is going and I can\'t wait to read more. Hermione is definitely attracted to Lucius, or, at least, turned on by his advances. I can\'t wait to read the smut. ;) Very good work.

You are an excellent writer! I cannotieveieve how the story flows so well. You have immense creative talent and I look forward to reading more chapters from this story. I am enjoying your protrayal of Lucius and find him to be extremely sexy and dangerous at the same time. Thank you for a stimulating erotic piece of work!