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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice comedy/adventure antics in the classroom. Good job of describing the events. You did a pretty good job of capturing the characters as well.
One piece of constructive criticism: it is easier on the reader's eyes, and ability to comprehend who is speaking if you put a line of space after each speaker is done before going into the next character's contribution to the conversation.
One piece of constructive criticism: it is easier on the reader's eyes, and ability to comprehend who is speaking if you put a line of space after each speaker is done before going into the next character's contribution to the conversation.
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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your other story and I'm interested to see where this story takes me! :D Good job.