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September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
im really looking forward to more of this. it is very well written and easy to read. it just flows quite nicely. best of all severus isn\'t OOC. thank you!!! keep the updates comming...btw how soon till the lemony goodnes.
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September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*grins at Gwen\'*
Greay toy to make your debut, girl! I\'ll keep reading as long as you keep writing. Hermione\'s letter is good, quite in chaer fer for her. Should be... interesting... to see what develops... :)
Greay toy to make your debut, girl! I\'ll keep reading as long as you keep writing. Hermione\'s letter is good, quite in chaer fer for her. Should be... interesting... to see what develops... :)
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September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i hope you continue with your story,it sounds interesting
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September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this story is awesome please please please please keep writing They may not be reviewing but look at the hits you are geg ang
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September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sounds intresting .... please update soon.
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September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far. The story is written nicely, there are few to no grammatical errors, and I actually want to know what happens next. ;)
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September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love how you sketched Hermione, Severus, and Remus\' character. The idea that Remusngs ngs the werewolves, to help fight against
Voldemort is great. I have really enjoyed your story so far and can\'t wait for new parts. I like Hermione and Severus together, but with
Remus it is okay to.
Voldemort is great. I have really enjoyed your story so far and can\'t wait for new parts. I like Hermione and Severus together, but with
Remus it is okay to.
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September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
Well I think it\'s a great story so far. I hope you\'ll update soon, because I want to
know what\'s going to happen between Hermione and Snape and Hermione and
Lupin. I always prefer Hermione with Snape, but a bit of Lupin loving is quite alright too.
I hope other people will give you a review too, you desere it.
Maddy
Well I think it\'s a great story so far. I hope you\'ll update soon, because I want to
know what\'s going to happen between Hermione and Snape and Hermione and
Lupin. I always prefer Hermione with Snape, but a bit of Lupin loving is quite alright too.
I hope other people will give you a review too, you desere it.
Maddy
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September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This looks as though it\'s going to be a great story. I hope you\'ll post another chapter soon :) Just one bit of advise - if a new person starts speaking, please start it on a new line. It makes it so much easier to follow :o)
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September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a great start - I like the way you\'ve used a letter to Harry to \"set up\" the scene. Looking forward to where you head with this one!!