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by Fervesco

person lala
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, good question, I think it would be Ron\'s kid. Polyjuice seems only to change the outer aspects of a person so all other \'things\' belonging to the user of the polyjuice would remain their \'things\'. That\'s just my two sickles.
I found your story quite funny. Hermione get\'s a bit mad if she dosen\'t get what she wants. and Snape....wooo, i\'ll take two please. *Snicker*
person Lizski
schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh gods!!! I love this idea! I\'d love to see it developed even further. Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant!
person Jessica
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think that it would be Ron\'s biologicaly since the polyjiuce doesn\'t last forever . Basically I think that the sperm would change. But who knows. Please write more! Possiblty the Ron with Millicent even.
person Jessica
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for my typos but I guess yon sen see how much I liked your story!
person Kiki
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm... Good question. Oh, and good fic too, *LOL* I really liked the fic. And I think that if Ron as Severus got her pregnant it would be Ron\'s baby. From what I gathered (and I could be completely wrong), Polyjuice Potion just changes your appearance for a time, not your integral makeup. For instance, in the books, girls changed into other girls, and boys into other boys. That\'s my theory. You\'re still you, but it\'s comparable to having a full body costume on. That\'s just how I undand and it. But I really enjoyed the fic. Keep up the wor work!
person Annabel Lee
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
mkay, while i loved this fic, i have to point out that according to your descriptions of sex, you are either a man or a virgin (or both.) it was a bit unrealistic.
however, i do underd thd this is fantasy, and it was indeed a very nice, and quite well-written fic. maybe a little more attention to the details in a sex scene would make it even hotter, but that was the only thing i found wrong. good job! very IC snape!
person Anon
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
interesting
person Ira
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Grinning. Unable to stop grinning.
person maddy
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know what to say else bout it than, WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.
OMG, you know how to write a smutty fic.
Keep on going and write more smutty fics.

Maddy
person M.A. Raie
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, nice. Very vivid imagination...I love how Snape was so aroused. I was surprised Ron didnt back out when Snape began pushing himself into Hermione. I guess Sevvy has that little air of control, eh? ::wink:: Anyways, me like!

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