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for Save Me From My Pain

by queenpoet

person AlbinoDrow
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this was an awesomory,ory, i just read the whole thing and im still in tears after reading about snape! Even though you did change the ending to a much happier one im glad you still kept the suicide scene, its kind of like a pick your own ending and having Severus die really makes people remember your story. ...im gonna cry just thinking about it.... anyways, awsome job and i congragulate you! (....bursts into uncontrollale tears...) ...i cant stop thinking about it...
person Ahrimanne
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. I have been on the edge of my seat, anticipating Severus\' arrival, cringing while Hermione kissed malfoy while waiting for what can only be hermiones \'Professor in black robes\' (knight in shining armour)And I let out a loud \'Yes\' when he arrived. I am so into this, i can\'t wait for more. If you want suggestions as to which way to go, then follow your intuition, you\'re doing it perfectly... Go girl!
person Ahrimanne
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so when I wrote the previous review i was only upchapchapter 10. I then read the reviews/spoilers for the rest of the un read (at that point) chapters.
Now i have read to the end and I can say this.
This is the first fic I have read that has created such a beautiful death scene, which in turn caused me to behave totally out of character, and get upset. Normally i can tell myself \'its just a story it\'s not rea(lik(like any of it really is). Still pretty much speechless about the emotion and the scene................................................................
Wasn\'t too keen on some aspects of his letter, it was as if he was guilt shifting, .....dying so you can live..... and I never thought that anyone other than myself ever wrote a dream reality to mislead my readers. It caught me out. Thank you so much for making me feel like I\'ve been caught, when your next fic is up, please feel free to email me with a link or other. I don\'t want to miss any if its like this.
thanx
person SandraM
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
With my beloved werewolf? Of course I\'ll read it!
person Deb >^..^<
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I do like the Remus/Hermione pairing & I like your work so I will absolutely be reading the sequel*
person Sai-chan
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow....i\'m stunned... you are a truely talented writer. That letter that Severus wrote in Hermione\'s dream made me cry. thats the 1st fanfic to make me cry. ^_^\'\'
person k8gsmith
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i tried to review last night but my computer had other ideas.

while i typically hate sad endings, this one made a lot of sense. while i may bemoan the loss of severus (making a \"happily ever after\" ending unlikely, though not impossible), i am more put out by the lack of cojones*one one might have to flame anonymously. harrumph!

i\'ll be looking for additional posts from you --e woe work.
person GeekGoddess
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well....to say that the chapter before the epilogue was a surprise was an understatement......it was a well written kind of understandable chapter.....I had at that time wondered what the ramifications of Snapes\' action in the past was going to have on his relationship with Hermione.....I sat at my computer yelling NO!!! at it.....needless to say the computer had nothing to say to me when I shouted at it......when I read the epilogue......LOL....you are one wicked wicked wicked writer.....in a move similiar to the scene in Dallas when Bobby walked out of the shower...I nearly screamed......well done is alcan can say. Good luck in your next st...I...I can\'t wait to read what you write next. :)
person Laurie
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes, we still want a sequel. This is a great fic and I am sorry that some people did not like your original ending. With either ending, the fic was still great. But please do the sequel..........
person Aly
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it... Making that a dream was a AWSOME idea. ANd totaly beleivabul. Wonderful. Wow. Ect. Aly

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