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for Rules Were Made to be Broken

by Fervesco

person jen
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
so hooch was the one to find them then?

threesome?
person Rilla
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, busted! By Madame Hooch no less! Ouch.
person Derr
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I take two Sev\'s in the morning and you can keep the Madame Hooch. Why are these people so nosy? :)
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Shem races in thread hoping against all hope that she is once again first in a long line of reviewers* ::panting:: That was absolutely delicious....Fuck what it does for anyone else\'s strees levels, for I am now sated at the very least...and in my selfish little world that is all that matters! YAY for excellent shag scene...hopefully more forth comming...

As a side note, had cable connection installed yesterday, so I can\'t help it now that I am always online...*cheers echo through Shem\'s mind*

See you in the next installment..(soon I hope)..oh..and once again, well done on the humorous chapter title...

Loving it...

Shem xxx
person Deb >^..^<
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH MY, that breakfast would be DEVINE!!! Talk about being woken up the nice way;-) As for Madame Hooch, hello, can we say knock OR better still, stay the hell out!!! What\'s she going to do? Can\'t wait for chapter 7!!! Deb >^..^<
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes a lemony breakfast is quite good. Loving this story... can\'t wait to see what Madame Hooch does about this situation.
person Deb >^..^<
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Be still my heart*
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are such a tease. I was expecting a lemon the way things were going, then boom! No lemon.
person shemhamforash
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Shem lies on floor and makes hap hazard attempt to be coherent* ROTFLMA (and)TO!!! There was just sooo much about that chapter that had me peeing my pants, I would practically be highlighting the lot if I were to point it out...but that whole \"she what\'s me?\"...fucking priceless!!! Sev the gentleman hey? That is an interesting turn of events..ahem..turn upwards I hope in the near future anyway...How the Hell are you going to justify breaking them up? It is going to have to be an absolute whopper of a doozy...

Hmmmm....you enjoy my company? Well I suppose that makes you friend number 3 (and also ngednged)...Not even my other 2 can stand me for large amounts of time...quite an achievement on your part...

gotta go...someone needs biting badly (not in a good way either) *bares teeth in rediness to launch self at bad bad person*

(bloody ex)

Wanting more...loving it...

Shem xxx
person Helena
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dear Fervesco, I\'ve already become one fan of yours!!!!
I\'m very excited about this new story, please try to update soon!!!

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