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I just read chapter 3 & wanted to review before moving on*

Yum yum!!! What a great fic! I like it! I don\'t know how I missed it before, but I\'m glad that I didn\'t miss it this time! And I hope she gets to have Severus for dessert! Mmm mmm good!!!

Chapter 4 was yet another wonderful piece of work!!! I\'m looking forward to hearing about their dinner & \"dessert\" ;-)
Deb >^..^<

Much better spacing :-) This was a great chapter :-)

This is absolutely brilliant. Can\'t wait for the next update.

::shivers with delight:: She\'s gonna go off and marry Lupin after THAT?? Oh, and who did get her virginity? Keep up the FANTASTIC work!! I look forward to the next chapter. I don\'t understand why you didn\'t like this one. I did. :)

-Gwennavierre

I really enjoy this chapter! honestly,really good.Think it\'s the better Severus\' characterization I\'ve ever read..and I\'ve read more! trust me,I simply love the way you describe fee feelings..but I\'ve a question: why he doesn\'t want a virgin one? (Hermione or Liz from Forbidden) he must be glad of such sort of \"present\"..or maybe he thinks that he can be blackmailed by them?

Kisses
Virgy

Lovely smut!!! And the exchange between Severus and Minerva was hysterical.

Ohhh Wooww! THAT was so damn HOT!!!!! Have a lot of authors suddenly discovered that they have a hidden sarcastic bastard within them or is it just me??? I fto sto see how you can justly break them apart after THAT...Will be mortaly wounded by it I am sure...I will save the threats and intimidation for now though in anticipation of how exactly you are going to justify their break...and dare I suggest their reconciliation...

Sooo want more of this as soon as humanly possible...In light of that should tell you I expect to go back to the main page after submitting this review and see the next chapter there....Actually I will just open another now window to check before hand..hang a tick.....

Damn YOU!!!!!

Shem xxx

Working on this story is an excellent excuse to delay writing your school papers! I\'m enjoying this fic very much -- don\'t be in such a hurry to bump Severus out -- and hope you update soon!!!