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for Fate\'s Pawns

by SnapesPetPixie

person Deb >^..^<
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9 just made my heart melt!!! I adore the thought of him being so honorable, wanting her, but whe when it was right for them both!!! I also very much enjoyed how he had her without actually having her, even in the mind\'s eye the man is GOOOOOOD!!! Hoping that you will be updating again soon!!! Deb >^..^<
person shemhamforash
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It would be pretty scummy of me to beta your work and then not review woudn\'t it?
That chapter was absolutely poetic...No matter how may times I read it I still feel as though I am reading it for the first time...absloutely beautiful my sweet...

Waiting for the next

Shem xxx
person Cassie
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm....lovely so far. Please go on soon.
person shemhamforash
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Evil..evil author! bad bad evil cliffy! *snarls and tires to bite you through the screen*

Want more soon or I shall sick Gollum or one of my pet Skeksi\'s on you *evil menacing grin*

You have been warned!!!

PLEASE MORE!!!! I beg of thevil vil author*

Shem xxx
person Deb >^..^<
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
She got so close!!! I do hope that he will tell her that he wants her, but must wait until she is out of school. Can\'t wait for your next update!!! Deb >^..^<
person shemhamforash
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes...please feel free to contact me if you need a beta...and No I am not just offering so I can see the next chapters in advance!!!!*evil grin*

Shem xxx
person Kristen
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That is so cruel and cold hearted! Leaving a cliff hanger like that! How dare u! lol, jk. I love your stopleaplease continue! I really like your idea of combining chemistry and potions together, its very original and brilliant. Keep going!
person zenia
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wicked, evil girl. post the next chapter soon :D
person Rilla
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful!!
person Lorraine
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow, you have to keep up with this story, its amazing. i can\'t wait until your next update, but be assured it will be eagerly awaited.

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