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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 32
Wow. That last paragraph was brilliant. I could feel his shift in perception. Amazing, that. You have a rare gift for word choice that carves keenly to the picture that you want to show your readers. Thanks very much for writing. :)
Wow. That last paragraph was brilliant. I could feel his shift in perception. Amazing, that. You have a rare gift for word choice that carves keenly to the picture that you want to show your readers. Thanks very much for writing. :)
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 29... Is it just me or is Hermione starting to feel a bit differently about the baby?!? She is still talking about giving it up, but she doesn\'t seem to regard it as something totaly vulgar like she had in the begining!!! If she weren\'t having some feeling toward it, why would she care where it ended up, it wouldn\'t matter as long as it was away from her & out of her life!!! Am I reading too much into this?
Well, you know that I am still hoping that Hermione will have a change of heart & keep the baby, but.... at least she is thinking of options that will be in the child\'s best interest!!! I wonder if she would consider asking Draco since it is his sibling? The only negative would be that if she was to maintain her friendship with Ron, the child would be in her life to a degree!!!
I really am curious as to how this will all play out in the end!!! Til chapter 30, Deb >^..^<
Well, you know that I am still hoping that Hermione will have a change of heart & keep the baby, but.... at least she is thinking of options that will be in the child\'s best interest!!! I wonder if she would consider asking Draco since it is his sibling? The only negative would be that if she was to maintain her friendship with Ron, the child would be in her life to a degree!!!
I really am curious as to how this will all play out in the end!!! Til chapter 30, Deb >^..^<
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February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my... i can\'t believe it. This is... whoah, tough.
I really don\'t know what to think of this, but i hope that you will go into that more detailed later.
Update soon!
I really don\'t know what to think of this, but i hope that you will go into that more detailed later.
Update soon!
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my god...that was a bomb of nuclear proportions....then again...Snape suffered so violently at the hands of the marauders (even Remus and Peter who dithinthing to stop it....makes them just as guilty)...I still hope that this will bring an understanding and comfort that only one that has suffered the same thing can give.....I still want a Hermione and Snape and baby makes 3 ending.....I can\'t help it.......there are rape victims that become pregnant and give birth that end up raising the baby with no trauma....its kind of a way to move on with your life.....Hermione needs normal.....so much happened as a result of her kidnapping...so much was put into motion.....and so much has changed.....I happen to know of a girl I went to high school with that conceived a baby thru a rape.....she hated the child when she was carrying it....she called it the bastard and acted like she had a fatal disease.....her parents did not allow her to get an abortion because of religious bellieves.....when the baby was born she took one look at him and fell in love with him.....It also helped that her boyfriend loved her enough to stick with her throughtout thdealdeal.....they married just after she had the baby......she actually raise a healthy normal young man....that is respectful to women and takes after the man and woman that raised him.....My friend and her husband had other children and raised them all in a home full of love and respect.....I know your story is all planned out, but I thought i would give you another view.
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
James raping Snape? No way.... do you maybe mean she misunderstood? Maybe it is James raping someone Snape loved? I am so confused... Since Snape couldn\'t have carried Harry, I fail to see the similarity ::cries:: Help! Explain! Please!
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 28... Well this was an unexpected yet interesting bit of information that Severus \"shared\" with Hermione!!!
I do like how you have written about how she is dealing with the way the teachers & staff are treating her!!!
As always I will be looking forward to your next update!!! Til chapter 29, Deb >^. Deb
I do like how you have written about how she is dealing with the way the teachers & staff are treating her!!!
As always I will be looking forward to your next update!!! Til chapter 29, Deb >^. Deb
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what a great chapter... very interesting twist with James Potter and Snape... looking forward to the next update.
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. Holy crap. Is Hermione\'s perceptiocuracurate? Wow. Okay, trying to form a coherent sentence. Excellent chapter.
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I didn\'t see that one coming! Thanks, I so love a good surprise in a good story.
The intrigue deepens ~ and we wait to see what this new wrinkle brings to the one relationship that doesn\'t seem to set Hermione\'s teeth on edge ALL the time.
The intrigue deepens ~ and we wait to see what this new wrinkle brings to the one relationship that doesn\'t seem to set Hermione\'s teeth on edge ALL the time.
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO!!! James Potter? And Snape? He couldn\'t, wouldn\'t? That is so bad!
Well they conversed. Have a greater understanding of one another. Now what? (That is up to you.)
This is turning out to be an epic story. It could go on forever. (Or a really long time.)
Write more soon please. It is great how you are posting so many chapters of late. Keep it up.
Well they conversed. Have a greater understanding of one another. Now what? (That is up to you.)
This is turning out to be an epic story. It could go on forever. (Or a really long time.)
Write more soon please. It is great how you are posting so many chapters of late. Keep it up.