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Totally cool. What a twist!

Thanks

CAT

Hi, I quite liked this! I\'m interested to see where you\'re going, and the second person makes it interesting, too. I\'ll admit I\'m a little confused as to who \"you\" is, but I can ignore that. My nitpicky self feels the need to point out a flaw, however... you\'ve changed tense somewhere in the middle, from present to past. It worked in either tense, but not both! :) Anyhow,houghought I\'d point it out, because it looks like you care about your writing and all. Righty, I\'m off to read the rest of your fics! ;)

I really enjoy your Sev/Hermy fics and this one is really intrigueing. You need to point me in the right direction though of your Ancient Egyptian spirit. He is interesting and I want to know more. Are you going to do another chapter on this one?

i have no idea what the hell is going on in that fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It was a bit confusing, I didn\'t quite get who or what the \"you\" was. Also, on several occasions you jumped to \"I\" and \"us\", instead ofou\"ou\". But the camel bit was funny. :)

This is fascinating! I can\'t wait to see more of it.