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for Indecent Proposal

by AshleyZ

person Apollonia
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Draco and Hermione are still married and living happily with a son! *does the happy dance* Wonderful job and awesome love scene! Two thumbs up!!!!!
person Sky
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet! You did a great job with this -- I\'m glad Hermione ended up happy in the end. :)
person Jules
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great fic. I love the silencing charm on Harry & Ron during the wedding. Good description of the feelings and the connection between Draco & Hermione. I liked that it was a challenge for both of them to rely on their emotions and gut instincts rather than just their intellect, which is their norm.
Was sad to see it end & hope you write more D & Hr fics!
person Raphaela
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! This is one of the best Draco/Hermione fics I
person Yawning (not logged in)
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous story. Being a sneaky S.O.B. aside, I can see Hermione falling for Draco when he shows a kinder side. Update soon please.
person Joga
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story!
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bravissimo! I **LOVED** your fic darl, it was awesome :) You\'ve made Draco perfectly balancetweetween snarky pride and having actual feelings and I really indentified with Hermione. Who cares if anbything\'s OOC, you\'ve fitted them together perfectly for this story and it\'s GREAT! Peace, can\'t wait for something more. Onward and upward

~Faerie
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a terrific job in writing!! Great plot and very easy to read! Can\'t wait to enjoy the next chapter!

~~ The Blue Lady ~~
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great Honeymoon! And how sweet was Draco! A little baby boy! And Draco, the proud Father. But, THE END!! Really hated to see that!
:(
Hope to read another one of your stories in the future!

~~ The Blue Lady ~~
person z26
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great short story. You could have drawn it out more if you wanted, but I think it is perfect just the way it is.

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