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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its a little OOC on Draco\'s part---- but nevertheless, very entertaining.
i love the twist in Hermoine\'s heritage----but a lot of loopholes. Molly and Hermoine\'s mom\'s age couldn\'t be of much different. at least herm\'s mom could have been Molly\'s sister instead.
keep on writing!!!! and thnx, hope u finnish this fic.
i love the twist in Hermoine\'s heritage----but a lot of loopholes. Molly and Hermoine\'s mom\'s age couldn\'t be of much different. at least herm\'s mom could have been Molly\'s sister instead.
keep on writing!!!! and thnx, hope u finnish this fic.
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this incredible fanfic!!! I\'m from Spain and I was reading the story straight away, so many hours that my eyes hurt. But it worth it!!! I hope you understand my review! I\'m better
reading English than writing it!!! ;o)
Good luck!! I will probably be back to read the secuel!!
reading English than writing it!!! ;o)
Good luck!! I will probably be back to read the secuel!!
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good... I\'m hoping to keep getting such good chapters... and good characterizations!!!
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November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story ive read it before but like it so muchh i had to read it again
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ll kill you.... how could you do this, I was happy and that they can go on with thie life and be happy.
byt nooo, you had to make my cry, didn\'t you? grrr.
i read the story from beginning to end, and belive me, I HATE THE END!!!!!
fiks it, make them happy, pleace, my tears wont stop...
i didn\'t like the start that good, byt the story became very intresting, and i began to love it.
but you\'ve destroyed the happy endig. so the 11 years lather part, I won\'t read it (if you\'re ritten it), because then i\'\'ll know how long it was til they found the kids. they will find them 5 minutts after the story that i\'ve read, and the kids will be alive, and they will be happy for the rest of their life
just let me live in my dream world, or bether, make that real in this story, pleace I beg you on my knees. . . \"sniff\"
byt nooo, you had to make my cry, didn\'t you? grrr.
i read the story from beginning to end, and belive me, I HATE THE END!!!!!
fiks it, make them happy, pleace, my tears wont stop...
i didn\'t like the start that good, byt the story became very intresting, and i began to love it.
but you\'ve destroyed the happy endig. so the 11 years lather part, I won\'t read it (if you\'re ritten it), because then i\'\'ll know how long it was til they found the kids. they will find them 5 minutts after the story that i\'ve read, and the kids will be alive, and they will be happy for the rest of their life
just let me live in my dream world, or bether, make that real in this story, pleace I beg you on my knees. . . \"sniff\"
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October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what?! you dare leave it there?! *bursts out crying* i hate cliffies....
update asap.. please?
update asap.. please?
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August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Thats all I can say, that is definately the best story I've read on this site so far! I'm going to do a search for Secrets in the Eyes of the Enemy now, but if it isn't out yet PLEASE emai whe when it comes out!
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July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
OMG! Great story ever.... the the ending!!!! Is there a sequel? Another chapter? Oh god please tell me!!!
Lol, please email me or something to tell me!
Youre such a great writer!
~kate
OMG! Great story ever.... the the ending!!!! Is there a sequel? Another chapter? Oh god please tell me!!!
Lol, please email me or something to tell me!
Youre such a great writer!
~kate
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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
BAD! BAD! That was....horrible..terrible. I...I....OH!
So I cant sleep and I decide to read a fic right? I search randomly under the name Draco (cause he\'s so darned hot) And I find one that not only has Hermione in it (my fav pairing) But it is also complete and I wont have to wait on pins and needles for another update. So I coast threw all 16 chapters, and its good. Great in fact, I\'m really enjoying it, and am really into it. Then I settle myself down for a nice happy ending. I have white lace in my head and rose petals, but what do I get? Blood. Yeah, I almost died. My mind is too slow at five in the morning to make that kind of agustment. Oh my....So know I have to drive back to school tomarrow and buy books and all that rot. In the mean time I\'ll be thinking about this fic. And the fact that the sequel has only four chapters in it and prolly isn\'t finished. Well, you can be asured that you will hear from my as I review and beg shamlessly for more chapters. Gods, I hope your happy. That was a cruel stunt. I\'m going to go cry now...
Oh yeah, and just to make myself clear...I LOVED it. ^_^
So I cant sleep and I decide to read a fic right? I search randomly under the name Draco (cause he\'s so darned hot) And I find one that not only has Hermione in it (my fav pairing) But it is also complete and I wont have to wait on pins and needles for another update. So I coast threw all 16 chapters, and its good. Great in fact, I\'m really enjoying it, and am really into it. Then I settle myself down for a nice happy ending. I have white lace in my head and rose petals, but what do I get? Blood. Yeah, I almost died. My mind is too slow at five in the morning to make that kind of agustment. Oh my....So know I have to drive back to school tomarrow and buy books and all that rot. In the mean time I\'ll be thinking about this fic. And the fact that the sequel has only four chapters in it and prolly isn\'t finished. Well, you can be asured that you will hear from my as I review and beg shamlessly for more chapters. Gods, I hope your happy. That was a cruel stunt. I\'m going to go cry now...
Oh yeah, and just to make myself clear...I LOVED it. ^_^
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December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awesome story