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October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved it:) The closet scenes were very cute in a teasing sort of way. I like the idea of Draco being sexually frustrated; it serves him right for being an adorable jerk. The whole Harry and Draco conversation in the l rol room was really funny. Harry was a bit too happy wasn\'t he.
It\'s too bad you ended it there, because it would have been nice to find out what happens from there. I hope you change your mind:)
It\'s too bad you ended it there, because it would have been nice to find out what happens from there. I hope you change your mind:)
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just had to shout out that this is a very sweet fic. *Love It!*
Have to second Campy\'s request for a sequel so we find out what happens \"the next day\" at Hogwarts, and with the Grangers & the Malfoys. I think the poop will hit the fan.
Have to second Campy\'s request for a sequel so we find out what happens \"the next day\" at Hogwarts, and with the Grangers & the Malfoys. I think the poop will hit the fan.
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October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*weepy* What a wonderful ending to a great story. I am all weepy now because of you! *snifflee ste story was hot and also had a point -- Draco was delicious and Hermione was such a vixen. She really knew what she wanted, eh? Great work!
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great beginning are you planning on more chapters or was this a one time thing!!!!
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
One word, two syllables - AWESOME! Draco and Hermione forever!!!!
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellently written!
I love the wit you showed in their first encounter in the Astronomy Tower. I think the understated NC-17 is more witty than a full blown sex manual. *wink*
Also, I think the Gretna Green idea is so sweet - and I enjoyed the joke about Ron getting physically ill and Draco thinking of it as a benefit of his marriage. Draco\'s insecurity and initial confusion were lovely touches as well.
The one thing I feel that your fic suffers from is its abrupt ending. What happens next? Where do they go from here? Although you\'ve fulfilled the CV requirements, your story hasn\'t reach a firm resolution yet - and I for one would love to see how you bring this marvellous fic to completion.
I love the wit you showed in their first encounter in the Astronomy Tower. I think the understated NC-17 is more witty than a full blown sex manual. *wink*
Also, I think the Gretna Green idea is so sweet - and I enjoyed the joke about Ron getting physically ill and Draco thinking of it as a benefit of his marriage. Draco\'s insecurity and initial confusion were lovely touches as well.
The one thing I feel that your fic suffers from is its abrupt ending. What happens next? Where do they go from here? Although you\'ve fulfilled the CV requirements, your story hasn\'t reach a firm resolution yet - and I for one would love to see how you bring this marvellous fic to completion.