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This is totally irrational you forget that Draco respects his father and Hermione would NEVER wear a mid drift shirt. Really.

SHIT PPL, this is the second one I looked in today and once again WHY DON\'T I LIKE IT? Damn! Ok I don\'t want to be mean nythnything, I know my fics are not \'great\' actually they suck, but I\'M ALL HONEST AND STUFF: the few sentences I read are just written in a very immature way. It\'s kind of annoying. Aprat from that I have nothing to say, as I just read a bit.

GOOD LUCK:d Faithful

REALLY ADORABLE!!! things r a little 2 rushed tho... just a bit. good fic! KEEP WRITING!