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by Shiv5468

person Anon
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12... Payback is a bitch... in this case a BEAUTIFUL bitch!!! I loved this & can\'t wait to see what happens next!!! Do we see a DM/NL get together in the future?!? Til chapter 13, Deb >^..^<
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, forgot to sign that one*
person yncarn8
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see Severus deferring to Hermione\'s better judgement. Poor Neville - when Hermione finds out about his little crush she\'ll have his gonads for earrings! Loving your work as always sweetie!
person gthistle
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good for Draco for taking his punishment in stride, and good for Hermione for turning the illicit Legilimency around.... If Severus pokes around in her mind and she knows he\'s doing it and doesn\'t mind (much), does that legitimize what\'s technically an abuse of power? (Rhetorical question--now you\'ve got me thinking.)
person Honor
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!(12) my favorite so far! lots of laughs. :)
person spaz141
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hee hee, thanks.
person Kim
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shiv,

What a great chapter!! Can\'t wait to see what Draco says next. Keep up the great work.

Kim
person busarewski
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad about not having reviewed you work more often. It is always a pleasure to read your updates. They have bite and often very refreshing takes on the characters\' personalities. In this last chapter I enjoyed your reluctantly truth-telling Draco, and Neville, oh dear, his life seems to be peakup iup in the future. What fun, and good for him!

Most of all I admire your productivity. I am amazed at your stamina, and do know that your forthcoming works will be eagery awaited and res sos soon as poss. How do you do it? I want some of that muse\'s energy. Writing so much, AND working and having a life. I wouldn\'t mind doing just one of those things. =)

Will try to be a better reviewer. As a lurking reader it is the least I can do.
person Anna
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"Much to Hermione
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11... I really enjoyed this chapter!!! The \"even Muggles could do damage with a blunted carving knife anougnough determination\" was FABULOUS!!! I like all of Severus\' inner musings & the fact that Hermione had a plan to take care of it all!!! I am looking forward to seeing how people react when they see them as a couple!!! Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^<

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