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by Lizski

person Scarlett
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have read this story from start to finish without stopping, i have loved every minute of it. You are a fantastic writer and i cannot wait for the next chapter. :)
person Pyegirl
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And I\'m curious -- having been re-reading the story -- Hermione is convinced that her parents will be appalled. Are you going to introduce them into the story? Many possibilities are there. I would hope, though, that her parents would be good parents, and demonstrate that they really love their child -- I\'ve read many stories where the Grangers are not particularly likable. Hermione, however, IS, and usually a child like her has EXCELLENT parents. Even if they are dentists. (joke)

And maybe a Severus/Tonks match? While I\'m sure that there may be some of those around, I haven\'t seen them EXPLICITLY narrated. And CLEARLY, this Severus needs to get laid. And I like your Tonks.

I also recently re-read Lucuis\'s Bookshelves. Still loving it. And especially his habit of pinching his nose. YOU GO!
person pyegirl
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(CONTINUED) Of course, there certainly may be MANY Tonks/Severus stories out there. It may be that I just haven\'t seen them because I haven\'t looked for them. I wouldn\'t want to offend anyone. I just think that it makes for an excellent side-pairing in stories such as this. Ahem. I\'ll stop now.
person angel
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story and i cant wait in till you update next and i hope snape comes around and in till next chapter (which i hope is soon ) please update soon adn keep up the great work and late for now

angel
person pyegirl
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say -- you\'ve created perhaps my all-time favorite fanfic line: \"Hermione was managing to save the world while keeping up her studies\" -- I LOVE IT!! It\'s sooooooo McGonagall. Still loving this story.
person Lianna
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Love love love your story!! It is so awesome, I can hardly wait for more!!!!
person Ajax
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is SO VERY good! go on! And I know everything about batling with husbands for the use of the computer. Mine is working tonight, so taking the oppurtunity to read a bit... ;-)
person a_reader
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww. This is a great story, but I\'m struggling with my inate desire to see Severus and Hermione together. This was sad, lol.
person camerilla
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry for the late review.

Will u follow the storyline of Book 5? I doubt on Snape\'s true intention.

Pls update
person cameowitch
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter - I finally got all caught up after bugging you off and on. Hope all goes better. RL treats you right and gives you the opportunity to write some more wonderful L/Hr for us. My suggestion - get Sev some bedroom action and maybe his snarkiness will settle down, just some. Love his nasty attitude but not the betrayal I feel coming on.

KEEP WRITING !!! SOON !!! PRETTY PLEASE !!!

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