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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh.... *pant, pant* Good for you and good for your beta! Now, be good to us readers (and me) and send in the severly sexy sixth chapter. Excellent!
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! HURRY, HURRY!
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WheeeeeeeeeEEWWWWW!!!! This is lovely lovely stuff......I\'ll be waiting for the update, having earmarked this delightful slice of lemon meringue pie. Very well written smut, and I love the way you described Severus\' body. Just like in my own slightly twisted and irresponsible dreams..... Blessings to you, your Muse and your Beta. Kait x
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good story so far. I hope to read more. I only have a little complaint--I think that the story moved a little bit fast. There wasn\'t any real time in between him trying to get away from her and her trying to seduce him. I know that their situation has nothing at all to do with love or anything like that...but oh well. That\'s just me. You\'re s is is going well and I hope to read more.
Ciao!
Ciao!
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February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmmmmmmmmmm, i love so much!! HG/SS ships are my absolute fave! i hope chapter six is coming soon!!!
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry!! Sorry!!
I\'m back and I love it!!
Mmmm smutty goodness!!
Kisses
GrrArrg
I\'m back and I love it!!
Mmmm smutty goodness!!
Kisses
GrrArrg
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January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Great fic. This was a really hot chapter... and I love that Severus allowed her to think and choose before acting (getting sure that he wouldn\'t end up with a scared silly girl running to Dumbledore telling that the bad professor hurt her).
Please, please, please update soon!
Please, please, please update soon!
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5 - I didn\'t notice anything wrong. Great writing, good detail, only slightly miffed that you had to end it there. Thanks.
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wooow, thats one gud story u got goin on there gf! Are u gonna make it long?
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmm fun story, do do do keep writing darling?
xoxo
...me...
xoxo
...me...