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November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was much better I will have nice dreams tonight ;) thank you!! I like the kinky Severus he jus seems like the kinky type. I hope to see more of this snape in the future chapters.Now off to the cold shower:)
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November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
:) Great writing. More bad boy action please. You know there\'s a wanton goddess lurking inside Hermione, let her out to play some more. Maybe some silk ropes, or there\'s always room for a good spanking. Update soon.
Jen :)
Jen :)
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November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another cool chap!!!But i think you can do a even bad boy of Severus!!!!!At least Hermione could do it!!!
;)
I\'m glad i liked the sugestion!
It\'s nice to know it.
Keep up the good work!
I\'m desperatly wait the new one :))
;)
I\'m glad i liked the sugestion!
It\'s nice to know it.
Keep up the good work!
I\'m desperatly wait the new one :))
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November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow its nice to get your way every now and then. Keep it up waiting without patience for the next chapter. Make it longer;)
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November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
As usual a work well done!!!!
But you might want to explain to us how Severus knows the several martial arts....maybe a trip to Japan is in order.....with Hermione...
It\'s nice to know that you\'re feelbettbetter!
Update soon....
Kisses
But you might want to explain to us how Severus knows the several martial arts....maybe a trip to Japan is in order.....with Hermione...
It\'s nice to know that you\'re feelbettbetter!
Update soon....
Kisses
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November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Once again a good chap!!!
It\'s only problem is being short!!!!
Hope you feel better soon.The damn flu caught me too. :)
I can\'t wait for the next chap....for something smut why don\'t you try a serenade???
Bye and hope to read you soon.
It\'s only problem is being short!!!!
Hope you feel better soon.The damn flu caught me too. :)
I can\'t wait for the next chap....for something smut why don\'t you try a serenade???
Bye and hope to read you soon.
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November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok forget this I am not playing this game. I wont ask nicely. Ill beg please,please,please,please,please give me a hot and heavy sex scene.I know he has it in him and I know you will give it the justice and excitement it needs. I am sure some of the other reviewers feel the same way.(and thanks for the teazer sex scene)OH ya I hope you are feeling better take cair.See ya at the next chapter.;)
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November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story! I voo puo put in the kinky bad boy bit, but that\'s just me!
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Man I leave town for a fiew days and you go all out and post like crazy. I enjoyed the sex scene I am so glad you did not use the virgin Snape. He is too much of a bad boy to be a virgin and I think that ruins a story. I hope you have more specific sex scenes im a big snape fan and love the thought of seeing him in the nude. Just remember he is a bad boy type and I would love to see some of that come out in future chapters I think Hermione would like it.;)
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn\'t review sooner.But college is getting hard now.I\'ve read the new three chaps and believe me you got it right!!!I love your wicked sense of humor!!!So Lucious has a rose tattoed in is ass????Who figures????the idea of a tattoo for severus is quite nice in deed!!!!I hope you can make a Severus with a dark and wicked sense of humor!!!and hermione too!
For martial arts i think that severus should practice more than one stile!After all he was Death Eater!!!
I hope you can update soon!!!!
With more occness, hummm ;)
bye
For martial arts i think that severus should practice more than one stile!After all he was Death Eater!!!
I hope you can update soon!!!!
With more occness, hummm ;)
bye