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for Come Undone

by Seamasu

person Anon
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
glad you fixed it. really gotorytory. hope you continue soon!
person chantalmalfoy
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was different. I\'ve never read it before, but then again, I never was a fan of ff.net.
I feel sorry for Draco. i hope that he gets to talk to Harry soon (for real). Lucius is such a bastard
in this fic.
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey i would love it if you continued this story, the characters are great!!
person Moeko
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You should reload this story. There are many places where there is text missing.

Other than that I think it\'s great. ^_^ Going very well. The emotion in the three chapters I\'ve read seem real. Very nicely done.
person Merrideth
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
are you finished with this or are ther more chapters to go???? I would love to see more!!!!

merrideth
person Anon
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is interesting and different from a lot of ones I\'ve read. I really hope you continue. Something I think you should know though is that parts of sentences are being cut off so some things may be getting left out.
person lupusdragon
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story, but the chapters are too long and they are being cut off. *pout* And I really want to know what is happening.

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