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for White Flower; Black Dragon

by lilyadar

person lena
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just now started reading your fan fic. Ran across it accidently while searching for something about lilly\'s. Definetly did not expect to get sucked into a story. Loving the plot, cant wait to see how you play it all out. Almost seems unfair that she\'s paying for the majority of the affair. After reading a part from her, Snapes complaints about cold and ropes in his wrists sounds like childish whining. Just a thought.
Cant wait to read more! Please update soon!
person Mary-Sue
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear lilyadar!
Recently I have read your fanfic
person Witch Girl
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story so far. I hope you put out more chapters soon. I\'m on chapter 15 and I hate the suspens, it\'s killing me. I usually like Snape/Hermione FanFic, but this was a great story. I hope the rest of the story is as good as it has been so far. It probly will be though. Like I said before I LOVED THE SYORY!
person ara
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH! Not another cliffhanger?! My poor heart can\'t take any more. YOU MUST UPDATE AGAIN & SOON!
person Yawning
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Sitting at computer with a bag full of popcorn* As much as I cringe reading about poor Narcissa\'s treatment, I\'ill ill hooked. So curious to see how this ends. Please say this has a happy ending?! PLEASE! Great update. ^_^
person rca
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap,s sts story is brutal and amazing. Never thought I\'d feel compassion for Narcissa and Snape?! Oh, I want Lucius and those Death Eaters to get there\'s! Phat story.
person Yawn
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not only are you tormenting Narcissa, but your torturing ME! Lol. Fabulous story. I\'m starting to wonder if Narcissa will live through this. Am I seeing a foreshadowing of someones death? Hopefully Lucius... ^_^
person Roni Black
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH I\'m dying!!!!! OMG this is soooo good, so sad... I have tears in my eyes... you MUST update soon... you can\'t leave me like that!!! *screams into a pillow* got... to read... more...
person gx-Silver
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I applaud you on another tight chapter. I despise Lucius more and more and I\'m really worried dor Narcissa. And where the heck is Draco?!
person ara
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lilyadar,

this is a masterpiece. I\'ve never read a more positive portrayal of Snape or Narcissa, even if they are committing adultry. Besides, I despise Lucius! Now I hope the next chapter is very soon?! I\'m on pins and needles wondering about poor Narcissa.

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