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Chapter 26-The Chamber of the Gods...
I Like how you wrote Draco\'s conversation with the Deities & am very curious to see what was meant by Meroviel\'s actions!!! I think that Draco was even more willing to give up everything than the Deities expected so I am hoping that they will return his essence!!!

I am looking forward to seeing how Hermione & Draco\'s relationship goes & just how it will prosper!!! Til chapter 27, Deb >^..^<

P.S, Good Luck on your exams!!!

Chapter 26-The Chamber of the Gods...
I Like how you wrote Draco\'s conversation with the Deities & am very curious to see what was meant by Meroviel\'s actions!!! I think that Draco was even more willing to give up everything than the Deities expected so I am hoping that they will return his essence!!!

I am looking forward to seeing how Hermione & Draco\'s relationship goes & just how it will prosper!!! Til chapter 27, Deb >^..^<

P.S, Good Luck on your exams!!!

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this story gets more and more amazing with each chapter wow

Okay I\'m sure that you haven\'t made Draco into a muggle because that would be cruel and you couldn\'t do that to your Draco, (Although if you have I think I may remove something rather important of yours with my bare hands! *Smiles sweetly*) Curse you and your ponderous chapter beast.
Jen
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To everyone reading the story; I thought I should just leave a note to explain that due to A-Levels starting next week, a virus on my computer and writer\'s block the next Chapter, as you have probably gathered, will be delayed. I will update as soon as I can but other commitments are making it difficult. Sorry for the wait and I hope you don\'t all abandon me. Thanks, Slytherin Secret xxx

Great chapter, it made me cry. Poor Harry, I felt so bad for him. Hopefully Draco can rescue Hermione and survive. I\'ll keep checking for updates.

elementaldeity

Chapter 25... So much sadness in this chapter combined with the element of hope, WELL DONE!!! I do feel so badly for Harry, Ron & the rest of the Weasley\'s, poor Ginny:(

I am very interested to see Draco\'s quest to get Hermione back!!! I really like what you wrote about the World-Walking & can\'t wait to see how you play it out!!! Til chapter 26, Deb >^..^<

P.S., I still feel that you did a WONDERFUL job on your battle scene!!! Of course it could have been longer, several chapters of drawn out bloody battle, but you did a fine job in getting the point made with what you wrote!!!

I can\'t wait for more!! Please update as soon as possible okay??

Part 24, Chapter 23-The Pieces Are Set, the Play is in Motion...

This is a FANTASTIC chapter!!! I really felt badly for Ron!!! I like how you have Draco & Hermione saving the people that they could & covering their tracks, WELL DONE!!! I also like that you had Draco save the baby, gave even more heart to his character!!!

I do like how you added bits of humor here!!! I LOVE these lines by Draco:
1. \"It will act as a constant reminder not to piss you off.

So I realized you posted this story also on fanfiction. I love it. But what happened to Hermione? Update...soon...please????