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Great chapter... it was dark, but I like that. I don\'t think a rational Hermione would have acted that way, but let\'s face it, with everything going on, she isn\'t being rational. I hope she wises up in the next chapter.

please hurry wit a new 1 im type desperte to know plz

good job!

Great Chapter, and such a quick update too! Hurray! I find that sometimes it helps to get what you\'ve written out of the way. Although you already have a layout of what is to happen it\'s like starting with a clean slate. I am sure the chapters will come to you more easily and quickly than you make it sound. This is a erfuerful fic, and indeed great writing. I will be checking in everyday!

Chapter 16.... I do like the rings that they gave each other & the things that she said about forever!!!

Sounds like The Dark Ones are taking over a lot now:( I do hope that when all is said & done Hermione will be the only one in her person!!!

So, what\'s going to happen with the bet? Will Draco tell her about it? The way I look at it is that this will be their chance to be more open, though I know her friends won\'t approve!!!

I do LOVE the way you write Draco!!! The love that he has for Hermione, the guilt he felt about what he almost did, this is a great character!!! Glad to see that he got Voldy\'s okay on their relationship;-) Ijustjust waiting for them to kill them all & be done with it!!!

I will be watching for your next update!!! Til chapter 17, Deb >^..^<

OMG! I love it! You should DEFINITELY use my idea! Or...I could write a mini scene and you could use that in your story?....no. It was a suggestion for YOU to write. Go ahead!

Thanks! I loved it!
--Liz

Aww... This is great! Update soon! And D/Hr should get pregnant! That would be awesome!

PLEASE DO NOT TAKE TOO LONG TO UPDATE!!!! I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY!!

merrideth

Hey, it\'s me again, and I just had this idea for your fic. It\'s competely a \"oh, wouldn\'t that scenario be interesting\" so NOT doing it is probably whats going to happen. It\'s just a thought.

Okay, Voldie calls all his DEs for a meeting--in the middle of, let\'s say, a tuesday afternoon (completely random on purpose), during a Double Potions of Slyth. and Griff. Reactions occur. What do they do? Draco, Snape AND Herm can\'t all just leave--It\'d be suspiscious! So what happens? I had a couple ideas. Maybe Snape jynxes them (subtly, blaming it on their potions) and insists they come into his office to take a medicine that would take a couple hours to \"reverse\" the \"effects\"? And he has to stay wiht them? I dont\' know. It was just an idea, that fit with this scenario pretty well. You see, this is when I wish people could write fanfics off of fanfics! lol Use it, don\'t use it, it was just an idea.

Could you email me when you finish the next chapter? I LOVE IT!!!!

Great Chapter, and of course I\'m still reading... it\'s such a great fic! There were a few small spelling errors in this chapter but nothing too major. I was surprised by the Ginny interaction, but glad it happened. I was just afraid that a head was going to appear in the fire the whole time.... OH NO! LOL! Anyways keep up the great work! I will be reading!