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for Secrets held

by missM

person MaddyRiddle
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great great chapter (or it was chapters?). I love the way the story evolves... keep writing... the muses are within you.
person Steph
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Never, ever, apologize for a long chapter. The longer the better. :) Especially with this amazing story!
person shiv5468
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice twist!

Now you\'ve got me worried that there won\'t be a happy ending. I like that. relyrely read angsty stories as they are so often overdone, but this one is spot on.
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh....what are you doing to my poor pair? I trust you have a happy ending.....I pray you do. I am still reading and still hoping for their happiness.
person Rilla
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Never apologize for long chapters! I look so forward to your updates that I can\'t get enough of them. This one was so beautiful and sad.
person summer
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t apoligize for long chapters...we readers absolutly love them. This is a great story, cant wait to see what happens next!
person deblovesdragon
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Miss M, where is my hope? This is not looking too good for our heroine. Oh the sweet angst of it!
He will remember it eventually, right! Right!!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
POOR Hermione:( I am so curious to know what all Albus told Severus as well as what he will say to Hermione? Will he be having a talk with Poppy on the issue of keeping Hermione\'s voice? I am so hoping that Severus will be more open to her & stop pushing her away, she has been through so much, they both have!!! Hoping that you will be updating again soon!!!
Deb >^..^<
person kate
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
a devastating chapter. you portrayed his confusion and her shock an a frighteningly sparse but complete way. hoping there\'s a path back to who they need to be (and, the romantic in me adds -- hoping they\'re together) but you\'ve certainly anticipated a difficult journey.

looking forward to more.
person Dose
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is getting really good. plesee updat sooon.

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