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for Secrets held

by missM

person MaddyRiddle
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! keep writing ;)
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Still reading and enjoying....
person Rilla
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I can\'t wait to read more. I feel so soror bor both of them. I\'m dying to see how they\'ll cope with all this when he wakes up.
person JennD
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am completely enjoying this story. I check far to often for updates.....and then you leave me with a cliffhanger like THAT :)

*sigh*

Anxiously awaiting..... ;)
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 is another GREAT one!!! I feel so bad for Hermione, she needs him back or out of her head, out of the garden!!!
I also feel really bad for George, I really believe that he cares a lot for Hermione!!! I do like how you mixed humor, sadness, lust, frustration & caring so well here!!! Really curious to find out where Albus is taking her & why?!?!? Til your next update & hoping it will be soon, Deb >^..^<
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
When I did the review for chapter 3, there was no chapter 4 showing..... what a wonderful surprise to find it when I was done!!! This was yet another FABULOUS chapter!!! So much more for Hermione to have to contend with now, not to mention that HE\'S FINALLY AWAKE!!!! What a way to end this chapter, but I doubt that I\'ll be so lucky to find chapter 5 waiting for me when I finish this review,doindoing some wishful thinking here;-) Now I really can\'t wait for MORE!!! Deb >^..^<
person kate
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
amazing, how much meaning silly things can hold -- like a hand-made ceramic mug, for example.

nearly had to stop reading with that detail; teh ideal that someone given such a gift wouldn\'t innately understand who precious and personal it was ...

I continue to hope that Severus and Hermione find one another in a healthy place; unfortunately for me, I\'ll read this story through to its end regardless because you write so well.
person deblovesdragon
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh Yipee!!! He is waking up!
Remember... my hope springs eternal. (Please a happy ending, of course, only if YOU want that :-)
Can\'t wait for the next chapter!
person Lunarose66@hotmail.com
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story. It seems to have such a sadness to it, I hope there will be some light in it soon. I really like the whole concept. It is truely unique.
person Rilla
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My heart is all tied up in knots. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. Poor George didn\'t know what he was getting into. Fred\'s proposal and Angelina\'s acceptance added a nice bit of levity. I do hope Severus eventually comes around for her. I think he needs her.

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