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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
can you try making the chapters a bit longer? anyway, im starting to think hermione is a bit ignorant here. honestly, i wouldn\'t giggle if i was captive. no offence meant. that was good of snape. the story\'s kinda fast if he already likes her. i like the debate part. oh and harry.... always the gryffindor! keep it up!
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December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
No need to thank me for the review, I thank YOU for writing the fic in the first place!
Can\'t wait for more!
Ciao,
Fish
Can\'t wait for more!
Ciao,
Fish
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December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You write very short short chappies. I like the story but am still eager for more, longer chappies and smut. hehe Please?
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November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was nice... attractive as Snape put it. s wes well written. I\'m patiently waiting for more updates!
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November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it, love it. Please more.
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November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! VERY interesting so far!
Can\'t wait for more... sounds like it\'s gong to be a rather promising tale worth telling...
Do continue soon!
Ciao,
Cannibalistic Fish
Can\'t wait for more... sounds like it\'s gong to be a rather promising tale worth telling...
Do continue soon!
Ciao,
Cannibalistic Fish
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November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh - he has claimed her. I can\'t wait for more. The chapters are great, but way too short. I mean that in the nicest, but most whiny, way you can imagine.