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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kind of sad way to spend your wedding night. Thanks for the update.
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it is easier to review here on AFF.
Wow what a kiss! Thank you thank you.
I liked that AD was more realistic about the expectations of the wedding and he said some nice words.
It does seem that magic tends to bring out certain feelings in our favorite pair.
Fast pacing in this chapter, it was probably the kiss. ;>
Looking forward to the next chapter to see SS\' reaction to her being with Ron.
Wow what a kiss! Thank you thank you.
I liked that AD was more realistic about the expectations of the wedding and he said some nice words.
It does seem that magic tends to bring out certain feelings in our favorite pair.
Fast pacing in this chapter, it was probably the kiss. ;>
Looking forward to the next chapter to see SS\' reaction to her being with Ron.
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May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a brilliantly touching story, please continue soon, i would like to know more about all this with Ron. Will she grow to love Severus? And what will Malfoy do now?
Thanks, this is a great story so far
Steph.
Thanks, this is a great story so far
Steph.
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May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i totally forgot about this fic, and i was going through my favourites and found it again only to discover three new chapters!
you made my night
the chapters themselveice,ice, i cant say i like ron, so im not unhappy hes had his heart broken
they were all well written, its nice severus has a female friend who can talk some sense into him
i await updates!
you made my night
the chapters themselveice,ice, i cant say i like ron, so im not unhappy hes had his heart broken
they were all well written, its nice severus has a female friend who can talk some sense into him
i await updates!
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May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
5 chapters to catch up on, woosh a lot has happened. Poor Ron I think my heart broke for him. And that kiss, my good lord! Steamy and just a kiss at that.
The fight with Lucius, terrifying (I knew she was dreaming the wedding in that chapter btw). Thanks, I enjoyed reading.
The fight with Lucius, terrifying (I knew she was dreaming the wedding in that chapter btw). Thanks, I enjoyed reading.
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May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a really int cha chapter, the kiss seemed to have a life of its own. I hope to see more soon.
elementaldeity
elementaldeity
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May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15... My heart goes out to both Ron & Hermione!!! She did have his safety in mind & was trying to tell him, but the way he found out was hurtful to both of them!!!
I really do like the way you worded the ceremony!!! This part.....
\"Severus and Hermione, I do not ask if you come into this union to land and cherish for all eternity -- for that would be a foolish request. But I do ask that you ln ton to your hearts, to care for each other during times of great need. Open your minds, to support each other with the difficult decisions that lie ahead. And share with each other your souls, to help guide you on the road to your future.\"
was PERFECT!!!nsidnsidering the situation it made it so very realistic & believable!!! I also like the way that the physical bond from the magical ribbons made their kiss so very INTENSE!!! (BTW, the middle name for Severus suits him so very well!!!)
I felt badly for Hermione when Severus came & took her from Ron, but I\'m sure he had his reasons!!! I do hope that Ron & Hermione will be able to get to a point where they can talk & remain friends!!! Can\'t wait to see how things go from here on out!!! Til chapter 16, Deb >^..^<
P.S., I plan on being along for the rest of the story, I HAVE to find out how it will all end!!! Things have been a bit chaotic so if I get behind I will catch up!!! *
I really do like the way you worded the ceremony!!! This part.....
\"Severus and Hermione, I do not ask if you come into this union to land and cherish for all eternity -- for that would be a foolish request. But I do ask that you ln ton to your hearts, to care for each other during times of great need. Open your minds, to support each other with the difficult decisions that lie ahead. And share with each other your souls, to help guide you on the road to your future.\"
was PERFECT!!!nsidnsidering the situation it made it so very realistic & believable!!! I also like the way that the physical bond from the magical ribbons made their kiss so very INTENSE!!! (BTW, the middle name for Severus suits him so very well!!!)
I felt badly for Hermione when Severus came & took her from Ron, but I\'m sure he had his reasons!!! I do hope that Ron & Hermione will be able to get to a point where they can talk & remain friends!!! Can\'t wait to see how things go from here on out!!! Til chapter 16, Deb >^..^<
P.S., I plan on being along for the rest of the story, I HAVE to find out how it will all end!!! Things have been a bit chaotic so if I get behind I will catch up!!! *
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice interim chapter to the wedding, but I am wondering what has happened to Ron.
nasty gossip she heard...
What makes this story special is HG has her illegal wand and has an alternative plan to dealing with the wedding. Glad to see you are getting support, writing fanfic is scary and can be difficult, especially this pairing.
I figure once she does marry Snape she should get her old wand back?? or are spouses just chattel in the wizarding world. Explains why McGonagall never got married if that is the . LO. LOL.
Liked the imagery and thought procs res regarding her mom\'s dress. Sentimental without being too sad. Glad you are keeping it simple and somewhat muggle.
Can\'t wait till the wedding. While I am not sure where you are going to take this story, if you have them get romantic you will need to have them get to a point where they want to kiss each other. => =>
A red rose to you
nasty gossip she heard...
What makes this story special is HG has her illegal wand and has an alternative plan to dealing with the wedding. Glad to see you are getting support, writing fanfic is scary and can be difficult, especially this pairing.
I figure once she does marry Snape she should get her old wand back?? or are spouses just chattel in the wizarding world. Explains why McGonagall never got married if that is the . LO. LOL.
Liked the imagery and thought procs res regarding her mom\'s dress. Sentimental without being too sad. Glad you are keeping it simple and somewhat muggle.
Can\'t wait till the wedding. While I am not sure where you are going to take this story, if you have them get romantic you will need to have them get to a point where they want to kiss each other. => =>
A red rose to you
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous story! This is the very first Harry Potter fic I have read (LOTR fic junkie!) and I am quite pleased with your story. Unfortunately for me, I feel myself getting sucked into another \'verse. Seriously though, I don\'t know enough about HP to really comment on the particulars of the genre but in general your characterizations are good and the story telling engaging. Keep up the good work and update soon!
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May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Geez, Pansy\'s a bitch.
That sentiment aside, this was a really emotional chapter. Hermione looking back on all the things that should have been and could have been; I\'m surprised that she didn\'t start balling outright.
That sentiment aside, this was a really emotional chapter. Hermione looking back on all the things that should have been and could have been; I\'m surprised that she didn\'t start balling outright.