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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me someone asassinates(sp) Fudge, errrg. I guess this will speed things up a bit. Thanks.
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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Still following your story and loving it! Update soon?
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December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Hermione is starting to make it a point to work herself into her marriage, a little at a time. I like the fact that you haven\'t made Severus into a bastard that would push her into this, but that he realizes that she will need time. I like the fact that he wants to protect her & I think that will help her in getting closer to him. Til next update, Deb >^..^<
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December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please post more! I love where this is going!
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December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I must say that your work has improved with this piece. You are paying more attention to your spelling and grammar and are paying more attention to the development of character rather than just concentrating on the plot.
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December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update.
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December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really admire your tenacity in producing these stories. They have been improving steadily and this one is definitely the best by far. The spelling and grammar have improved enough to let your creativity shine through. Don\'t forget spell check, though. Good luck.
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December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sev....he\'s gonna fsooosooo rejected. I understand how Herms feels though. Update soon?
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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sweet lordy, this is one of the better stoies with the marrage law idea, keep it up plese I want to see were this is going!
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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lovong your story and craving updates. Please soon?