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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like Ron is being a total (_!_)!!! I love it that both girls gave him a bit of needed info in the form that they did ;-) Til your next update!!! Deb >^..^<
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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Geesh, Ron is pretty ugly, good thing od sod slapped. This story is pretty fast paced and I\'m enjoying it. This has been an interesting challenge to follow. Thanks.
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cute idea, good start to answering the challenge. You\'ve got a few word choices that may have been the fault of your spellchecker that you might want to fix \"THROUGH the Great Hall\" in chapt 3 and again somewhere in chapt 4 (THROUGH meaning \'traversing distance\' vs THREW \' physical force\') And I think you want SS to be a CHEF, not a CHIEF (though he could do either)
Looking forward to more
Kat
Looking forward to more
Kat
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think it\'s a good thing that you are allowing Hermione to work into getting to know Severus slowly, she can\'t just jump into it. Til Chapter 5, Deb >^..^<
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading since the first and i am very much looking forward to reading more of your work. Please update soon?
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I love the last scene. Laughed my a$$ off. I like this story. I think it started off pretty well.
I think Hermione is a bit OOC. I don\'t picture her as the type to come to an important decision like this so quickly, even with Malfoy hanging around. But I think the OOC-ness has a lot to do with the WIKTT challenge...
Keep going.
I think Hermione is a bit OOC. I don\'t picture her as the type to come to an important decision like this so quickly, even with Malfoy hanging around. But I think the OOC-ness has a lot to do with the WIKTT challenge...
Keep going.
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Malfoy gets beat up. I hope Ron isn\'t going to be too much of a prat. Enjg thg this take on the challenge.
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November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sure that they didn\'t want everyone to find out thru Ron\'s big mouth;-) Look forward to seeing how Malfoy responds, not to mention how people will now treat Hermione. Deb >^..^<
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November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great start of the story. What will Ron and Harry do now that Hermione is married to Snape? Will they continue to talk to her? If and when Malfoy attacks her, will they support her? Please update this one soon!
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November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey i like the way your going with this!! keep it up! amy