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I see you\'ve read Dorothy Sayers :) (One of my favourite authors)

The chapter was funny and sexy and wellwritten, just as I\'ve come to expect of all your fics. I think that this one is my favourite, though :)

Omigod!!!! I actually woke up my mum because I couldn\'t contain the giggles. Its brilliant! I love it!!! I can\'t wait for more!!!! And I can just tell that they really are gonna end up together (well duh!). And I love the characteristaion of irritated Hermione. And especially the meddling old fool Albus. It really is a crack up.

Let\'s see -- it\'s the new year and you haven\'t updated this yet. I COULD complain but given the fact that you\'ve actually written and posted WAY more tha I have, I really don\'t have the right to whine, do I?

Still -- if you could see your way clear to letting me know how Severus and Hermione finally consumate their relationship (and PLEASE let them consumate their relationship!!!), I\'d be ever so grateful....

Even if you don\'t, I do so enjoy the way you combine humor, smut and romance. Sigh ~ if only men could do that in real life!!!

I love your stories, they are so funny! ah, I wish I was in Hermione\'s position. How thick can a girl get? I mean, it was obvious what the object poking her was...duh, a flashlight!

Gaah! Don\'t stop here. This is just too much for my poor hear to handle! *sigh. Another fantastic one on the way!

More, please!! I love this one, very funny idea, makes me smile everytime I read it. Thanks for sharing your considerable talents with us.

All the little touches in this chapter were spot-on and made me smile. Yay, slightly-nerdy!Hermione who wears boring sleepwear. The best detail was the poky book, which allowed split-second curiosity about body parts before not only reinforcing characterization but leaving a nice bit of suspense for Severus\' response in the next chapter.
(I have to say I like this sort of substantial fic better than Dirty Deeds--but write as you like, of course; I\'ll read it happily either way.)

Is there a fanon rule that ever/SS /SS fic has to specify Severus\' choice of underpants? It\'s a well-worn issue to the reader, sure, but if it\'s an \"age-old question\" to *Hermione*, I wonder whether this is something she\'s discussed with her school-friends.

Hee hee, this is too much fun. Thanks.

I love this story. Severus and Hermione try to pull one over on everyone and the joke is sooo going to be on them. How fantastic!!

You\'re making me insatiable. I want more! I love how they were plotting to give the best show, and how Hermione has no idea she\'s being set up :)