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by Darkwriter

person jenbachand
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
:) What a great story. I love it. I love Dante too!!! :) Interesting twist on the baby\'s powers. Hope they kick sWeasWeasley ass. Think the twins would help if they knew what Ron had done? Hope he starts slow with Hermione. Flowers are always a good start, though for Hermione maybe a book on Mages too. :)

Jen :)
person nesscafe
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Have I mentioned before that I love this story!?! I do! I really really do! Poor Severus is so worried! I hope everything works out for him. I always picture Snape as a man that needs someone to care about him. And I love that Darien is his and Hermione\'s child even though he used to be Harry! I hope they are able to keep baby Darien safe! Update soon! I like to review! ;c)
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Always wonderful and surprising. Please update soon.
person Temptation
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say hurry up & update. Q: Has anyone thought for Severus se ase a polyjuice of Ron to break the spell ? That way, Sev is spared the \"problems\" and it won\'t really matter if she hates Ron anymore than she already does? Just a twist. Can hardly wait to see next chapter(s)!
person Miss Night
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good story, I like it so much! I can\'t wait to see the next par it! it!
person pinkyheather
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. And I have to say, i\'m loving the fact that your chapters are so lonivesives us more to read :) Can\'t wait for more Ron bashing too. He\'s so not one of my favorite characters in the best of times. And Sev imitating him with Polyjuice? Poor Sev & Hermione. *G* Great work.
person kirien
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Deb,

your story is BRILLIANT. The entire notion of Harry de-aging himself and turning into an infant again was really disturbing, something that rarely happens to me in my extensive rea of of HP fanfic. You threw me for a loop by being startling anfresfreshing. You\'ve managed to be totally oril inl in the Hermione-returns-to-Hogwarts-with-childryliryline. It\'s plausible, and in Hermione\'s case, poignant and necessary. Ironic how the Boy Who Lived turns up stayintimatimate with his best female friend. Too bad it\'s not how HP/HG shippers usually envision it *evil smirk* . I can see why Harry would want to do it, since the pedestal the wizarding world\'s placed him on is a very lonely place, like living the bizarre bubble-life of Michael Jackson.

Arrgh! AFF is sooo slow and prone to overloading. PLEASE consider posting this fine work (and any others HG/SS) over at Lord and Lady Snape.net. It\'s peachy--fast loading, friendly mods, and a gorgeous layout.
person kirien
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"Weasley is our King.\" Abso-fucking-lutely NOT. I was never a big fan of his. Does his family--Ginny and their parents--realize what a gigantic, pustulent, sick ASSHOLE he has become?!? WTF is wrong with that Stupid Weasel??? How Dare He raise a hand to Hermione *thinking very dark, malevolent Voldy-thoughts*
person nesscafe
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I just started reading this and I\'m totally blown away! I\'ve never read a story like it and it\'s very well done! I was so disappointed that there was no more after chapter 13! LOL! You have to update again really soon! PL!!!!!!!!!!!
person slytherine_geek
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You really write fast. i wish i have a muse.... nice work by the way, make ron pay for what he did hahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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