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by geena

person spaz141
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee, I\'m glad Severus is feeling better. Pin up boy - lol. Thanks.
person lise
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sorry, just have to register my displeasure with their use of a POTION to tell them the formula.... it just hurts my soul. i\'m a biochem major, taking organic chemistry this year, you CAN analyse things without magic! it just takes a bit more sweat and tears. other than that this story really is fine, i\'m enjoying, just can\'t let that pass without comment

just for the future, don\'t know if you will ever write a similar story, but some techniques that ought to carry over from the muggle world of chemistry to the magical one of potions would almost certainly include purification of the separate elements, then individual analysis. purification steps would almost certainly carry over - separation by boiling point, by gravity filtration, separation between unmixable layers of solvents... identification probably would have to be magical tho, since i don\'t think the wizarding world has mass specs or ft-ir or nmr spectroscopy. then after that comes uncountable hours of searching through the reference books which i kid you not are larger than hogwarts a history (and there are seven or eight of them).

anyways, yes, i realise this has very little impact on your story and i am making a mountain out of a molehill, but it\'s a very personal and special molehill.

i AM a biochem-er, and we are not particularily known for our sanity.

lise,
who wishes she could have studied potions if all they have to do to identify a mixture of compounds was create a single potion. i really, really want some of that stuff!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 26........ He will have a fit if he finds out about the posters, but Sev as a pin up, I WANT ONE!!!

Will Hermione be seeing Sirius again before he leaves? He doesn\'t seem to be taking things between Hermione & Severu very well:(
ing ing for more soon, Deb >^..^<
person x
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just love Snape beeing an idol for teenage girls.. absolutely hilarious! Wonder if they have articles of him in those magazines. You know, his favorite color, potion etc, \"would Sev fancy you?\"-tests.. I can
person Red Writing Hood
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Goddess...Severus Snape a poster pin-up? Where can I get one of those???hehehehe

Red

person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 20-24........ These chapters were FANTASTIC!!! This story has made me love Sev even more!!! I do believe that he is the type of person to love 100% & in doing so would never let Hermione put herself at risk!!! I really like the potion, LUCKY Hermione!!! Looking forward to more!!! Deb >^..^<
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Does my heart goo dto see him comforted...even if it isn\'t by me. hehe;) Update soon?
person spaz141
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Wow, I\'m almost speachless. Thanks.
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fabulous story-- I hope to read the update soon.

Ciao ^_^
person spaz141
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahh!!! What happened to happy endings? Hermione doesn\'t make mistakes...or does she? Great chapter, thanks.

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