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for Coil of the Serpent

by ladyofarundel

person madee
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad you updated. I really love this story. After the 5th chapter I was wondering if Lord Voldemort\'s attack on the Potters and its aftermath (Sirius being framed, etc) were aof rof revenge for the Whomping Willow incident. Whether you\'re going in that direction or not, this is so good! More, please!!
person Skull Bearer
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was...wow, just wow. I have never read a story like this one and I like it a lot! You have completely smashed the portrayl of these characters (except Dumbledore, who we all know is a prejudiced old fart), but in such a way that they don\'t look OoC. Tom and Severus see in role even though we see a side of them that was never shown in the books and in precious few fanfictions.

Speaking of fanfictions, I\'ve never seen one explain Voldemort\'s actions in this way, congratulations on originality!

I really hope you update it soon, I\'m fascinated and I want to read more, when will Severus realise that his Tom and Lord Voldemort are one and the same? I\'d love to see his reactions. Also, I\'d like an clarification of Voldemort\'s actions, we\'ve heard the basics in the first chapter, care to elaborate? What brought him to that conclusion, etc, etc.

I adore the idea that homosexuality is seen as normal in the wizarding world. Very, very original.can\can\'t help but imagine Scarhead\'s face when he hears that his Godfather had a crush on his Potions Master! Hilarious.


Any way, I hope you\'ll update soon and I\'m saving these chapters to a folder so I can read them in case (Heaven forbid) you take this story off the net.

Skull Bearer.
person Shonee
schedule April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story very much, and I was saddened to see that there wasn\'t a sixth chapter yet.

I am anxiously awaiting part VI!
person yumi_no_baka
schedule April 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoy this fic
hope u can email me updates
or something
continue soon!
person Kari-chan
schedule December 15, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Awww.... that is so sweet.... this fic is so good... write more soon ^^ Love it ^^
person Amanda
schedule December 15, 2002 at 12:00 AM
This is very good.....but woefully incomplete. I found this from Fanfiction.net, thanks for the information. Sometimes a person just needs a good adult story, hehehe. Anyhow, it's been quite a few years since I read good slash (to date me I was in fandom, and of age for the first slash story, the K/S one.). This is nice, but I'm dying to know what happens, why Tom needs a magickal childe, and what he will do with it. And is someone reading Crowley? Sounds a bit like Moonchild, to me. Keep up the good work. I look forward to new chapters. More insight on the elder Snapes and their legacy etc. would be appreciated.

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