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I have been reading this story and the end of chapter 16 I finally flipped. I have been laughing and enjoying this story so much, but having MaGonagle give Hermione detention for the express purpus of making Severous's life hell is the icing on the cake. This is just what I would expect from this character. You are doing a beautiful job on this story even though the story is AU the character's base personalities are not. They are very much in character and that is difficult to do. Excellent job.

i'm not sure if i've reviewed this or not. it was a nice suggestion of minerva to lend out her equipment but ewwwww... wonderful writing waiting for more.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

damn. this story is absolutely amazing, you are a fantastic writer. it's the first time i've read a really good fic in... like years, maybe.

chapter 16: Go Professor McGonegall! That is so hilarious. V. good idea.

Another excellent chapter! I can't wait to see what Hermione comes up with next. Hopefully, Severus pulls his head out of his ass and gets the picture soon. Looking forward to the next chapter. I hope that the muses and the bunnies have learned to cooperate.

I love this. I have managed to reach chapter five, and I definitely don't need to put the heating on!!! I'm warm now!!! Thanks. And I'll read the rest as soon as I can. I want to find out what this is all about after all.

Hm... the Harry/Draco twist was interesting, if a bit out of the blue (I would have expected to see a little more of Draco in the earlier chapters). The Harry/Hermione lie is a good idea I think, but chapter 14 seemed a little odd to me. Hermione's emotions and thoughts were flying all over the place in a really strange manner that took me out of the story a little. I can understand that she may be confused and that her emotions ARE flying all over the place, but at the same time, I think that it the transitions could have been written a little better. I'm sorry I can't be a little more specific, but I can't place my finger exactly on what felt wrong about that chapter... it just didn't seem to have you're usual brilliant writing. Never fear though... I shall continue to read, and I have high hopes for the next chapters.

Great!

What is to happen next?

I just read chapter 12. I thought it was hilarious that they went straight from one library to a different one. Also, for some reason at the end I thougth "Aw! How sweet!" which is a little bizarre...
Anway, you're doing a really great job as far as I've read.
Keep it up,
Lucy