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hey, i think you forgot my review on the last chapter. i even quoted cartman for you. (can you tell that i have never truly let go of the pouty, whiney kid in me?)

Wow!....there are no words to describe it but:...Wow! Thanks for a good story, keep it up!

Hi--I just wanted to let you know how much I\'m enjoying your story. I usually run screaming if someone starts quoting lyrics, but this story came highly recommended (I think on WIKTT, but I\'m not sure). I scrolled past the lyrics, and I\'m so glad I did! I really enjoy the casual voice you\'ve given both characters, and you\'ve mixed drama and humor in a way that strikes me as pretty realistic. I loved the down-and-dirty fight between Draco and Snape in the last chapter, and I really look forward to seeing how you\'ll finish the story. Thanks for a great read.

wow daily updates...

Marvellous!! After that thouroughly spine-tingling cliffhanger, this wonderfully emotional and altogether happy chapter definitely made my day...

Thanks!

Arrrrrgggggghhhh! I have spent most of the time reading this fic wanting to slap Severus upside his astonishingly stupid ass, insecure head! God! I sincerely hope he can pull his shit togather, how frustrating. I LOVE IT! Hurry up and update.

reviewing chapter one; i dont normally read first person stories but as my sister spent five hours reading all the chapters you have so frittritten and recomended that i read yours i will give it a go.

once i have finished the four hours or so reading, i shall review again and tell you what i thought and if you have brought a change in me about first person stories.

This story is so unbelievably good. It\'s fantastic! I love it! I also love your refferences to the WWE and South Park, keeping in that spirit; This story is HELLA godd. HELLA HELLA HELLA good!

It was amazing that Draco could even stand let alone fight with all those blows (and the bite) to his groin. I guess that\'s adrenalin(sp) at work. Hermione\'s not dead, yay! Grusome(sp) fight scene, still feeling a little ill after that. Thanks for the update.

I don\'t know what is more evil...the chapter title and what I thought it implied, or the fact that it was updated about 2 minutes before I had to leave to return to work for the afternoon. Obviously, I quickly read it, to see what happened! If Snape doesn\'t realize what she means to him after this....he\'s not worth anything ;)

However, she is obviously still injured...and he is no doubt to an extent...so hopefully it is a complete recovery! How many more chapters do you intend to write?