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for Careless Whisper

by lildove42

person MaLady Verdi Molto
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, we have a problem. You see, on both chapter four and five I stopped just above the end, thinking one more line was going to reveal the name of the dirty wench that separated Harry and Draco, and it doesn\'t appear. I suppose you are correct in that if you have a cliffhanger, people will review your story, but really, must you? I mean, twice in a row and everything! And you seem to not want to update. (I\'m not going to take into account it being 12:30 AM on a Fri- err, Saturday morning, however, or the fact that e one only just read the entire story just now in one sitting. I find those facts irrelevant.) So, I really would like - I\'ve had an epiphany. I believe I know who the dirty wench is. I believe she\'s a particularly arrogant Slytherin girl. I do believe I\'m right... I hope so, because I hate her... Anyway, (I find lack of sleep makes me loose my train of thought, sorry) I\'d really like to be E-mailed when this story updates, for it\'s very interesting, and I find I\'d like to kidnap you and mkae you write the rest of the story... Lucky for you I find the need for sleep. You have been saved for the moment, it seems. I shall check back tomorrow, when I\'m not typing on a caffiene high. Please forgive all insanity.

~MaLady Molto
person Quiproquo
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Arrrggghhh!!!! Who is it? Who is it? I can\'t believe you!! What a frustating end!!
Anyway, your fic is really great, keep going,I want more, please update soon!!
By the way, WHO IS IT??
person river
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dude! Come on!!!! Why with all the clifhangers, huh??? You are steadily driving me insane! :)
person chrissie
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
where they hells the ending
thats not fucking fair!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Neko Taka
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!! This is the greatest fic ever! And I have this creepy feeling that its Sirius who set the whole problp. *p. *noddles* can\'t wait for more!
person carrie bradshaw
schedule December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you evil woman : )
person alex
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH!!!! a cliff hanger! what was the name? NOOO! oh no, please update as soon as possible! i must know who this person is, holy crap, i hate cliff hangers...
person StarWest45
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
dammit that was just mean ending there! there i am, throughtly engrossed, and the sentence just cuts off! evil. brilliant, but evil.
person chantalmalfoy
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
EVIL! you are so evil! Now, we have to wait to find out who it was!
And to see if Harry will be okay...

This is a very sad fic. I hope it starts to get better soon.
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You\'re going to be hexed Zabini!!!!!!!! you better tell all the true to Draco!!!Even if he look very nice in this story but i suppose the war can change a lot some one!

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