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for When It Rains

by NiniGrl

person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9... This chapter has been a real eye opener I l I like the range of emotion that both Devlin & Severus are experiencing as well as how much he is sharing with his son!!! I think it is WONDERFUL that Devlin is FINALLY getting to know his father, sad though that Severus never really knew before now!!! I am looking forward to seeing the 3 of them in a conversation togehter, there\'s still a lo be be explained!!! I think it would be good for Devlin to interact with both of his parents & for his parents to have to behave while with him.... who knows what that could lead to;-) Can\'t wait for MORE!!! Til chapter 10, Deb >^..^<
person spaz141
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, very nicely written. Thanks.
person meg
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Merlin!! this story is so good! Please keep \'em coming! It\'s so full of suspense and twists I can hardly deal with it!! This is so fucknig good! I love the added side with Draco and Ron...another great pairing....ahem anyways, you rock and so do your stories!! I can\'t wait for the , bu, but hey there\'s always tomorrow!!! haha sorry I had to, love! Update soon!!!
person Caliko
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wheeeee!!! WHat a ride! lol.. managed to scale a whole bunch of emotions, huh? Loved it!
person Lillithj
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just a note, I enjoy your story very much. I look forward to each update. The narrative and the dialogue between your characters seems effortless, which indeed a clue to how hard, I am certain, that you work at your craft. In the latest chapter, I particularly enjoyed the mirror images that Devline and Snape presented to each other. They certainly are two chips off the same block. I also enjoyed the continuation of the \"Let\'s Dance Around Each Other\" game that Draco and Ron are playing.

Thanks very much for your hard work. I look forward to the next chapter.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8... Devlin is full of surprises!!! I am sure that Severus will feel a lot of regret for missing out on so much of his son\'s life & hope that he will make an effort to make time for him now!!! I also hope that Severus will work things out with Hermione & bring his family together, the way it should be!!!

I can see why Draco & Hermione were hiding the truth from Lucius!!! Being with hermione was bad enough, but to have been with Ron, a Weasley, would have been worse, not to mention that there would be no chance for an heir to the Malfoy name!!! I am glad that Ron knows, just wish he wouldn\'t be so quick with his fists when trying to find things out!!!

Til chpater 9, Deb >^..^<
person FriendlyQuark
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hubba hubba! You write great scenes! justjust sexy, but emotioanly charged and character driven. I love Dev and Sev trying to out Slytherin each other there in the beginning.
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NiniGrl, it\'s not fair that Ron and Draco are getting more action than anyone else. Spread the love around a bit please. Hermione deserves some lemons too!
Thanks and keep writing please.
person Starwind
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh great chapter!! I love the wholn ann and Draco bit. And i really can\'t wait to see how Devlin will react when he hears the whole story. I hope u update soon!
person spaz141
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story, Ron/Draco creeping me out, but that\'s my problem. Thanks.

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