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for The Ties that Lead to Trust

by GoldenFeather

person Michelle
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write. Your story is so wonderful, and now I\'m all caught up in it and Istucstuck!!
person Teda
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, wonderful chapter. Love the story, but I don\'t recall if I\'ve reviewed before. Sigh, must be senility kicking in already. Anyhoo, thought Hermione\'s mother coming around a bit was a nice touch. It\'s understanable her parents would want blood if an older man ran off and married their only child. Hopefully her father will come around, too. Still, a declaration of love was very sweet! Aw. ^_^
person Static Wolf
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Bloody Blue Hell! Do you know how AWESOME this story is? I haven\'t gotten it out of my mind until I have finsihed aviaavialable chappies! I ha mou mountain of homework to do because I blew of sc cla classes to read your story, but believe me it was bloody worth it. I like the way that you distinguished Severus from other\'s possible opinion of him that he is a hopeless romantic. Despite how he is, you made his past a visible barrier inbetween Severus and Hermione. And I also liked how you made him insecure at the beginning. Oh I don\'t know how else to describe how bloody awesome this story is! sh, sh, I sound like a groupie. But as long as you keep writing chappies I will be your groupie....hehe. You are WONDERFULLY talented writer and I respect you a great deal. UPDATE SOON! And my talent and love will be forever at your disposal. And if you update soon I will give you mounds of chocolate! ^_^
~Static Wolf
person abra
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Home is where the heart is
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great. Thank you for udating. In love eh?! Hmm.....things can only get more complicated from now on then. I hope it all works out for them though. I love this story, please update soon. Until next time, Slytherin Secret :o)
person Gabriele
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. I like the way they started to like each other until the moment when they both realized that they love each other. I also like father Grangers reaction and the kiss on Severus cheek by Hermiones Gmothmother.
Just one question: was this real Latin? My Latin is rather rusted and its 25 years ago that I had to learn and write Latin, but the incatation did not sound very much Latin (at least for my ears) - but this also could be a mistake from me.
To sum up: lovely, romantic, wonderful story, which I put in an own folder as it is rather voluminious.
person Midnight Tiger
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh god my heart is still racing! i loved it! you ended out the scene with her mom well and the part about her hair being charmed was shocking! i cant wait to see how she resolved it with her parrents. or does Sevi resolve it? and oh, the confession, and the love making....so sweet, and wonderful and intense! i like that you had her cut her hair, and i just really really have no words to describe this...your story is so intense!
thank you for posting!
H.S.
person Michelle
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. ww.

That\'s all I can think after that one. :)
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 23... BEAUTIFUL!!! The way that they shared each other was ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!!

I really like the hair charm, very original to me!!! I also like the situation with Hermione\'s mother & Severus at least being cordial!!! I\'m sur her father will come around eventually!!!

Glad that her grandmother was able to go home & am hoping that her memories will be returned to her soon!!!

Til chapter 24, Deb >^..^<

person spaz141
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t think I have ever been brought to tears more times than by this story. Brilliant. Thanks.

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