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for Better You, Not Me

by anaischan

schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, you guys! I shall update soon. I just wanted to test drive a little of it. I had writer\'s block for a while too. >_<
person PAndPAndPrejudice
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
From the starts of things it sounds like it will be good. I\'m probably pointing out something a blind man could see but the first chapter was a little short, along with it not really getting into the stuff going on (no I don\'t mean slash or smut) that gets one really interested in the story. But as I said you probably know that and have your reasons for it. But I hope you keep working on this, and I would love to read more.
PAP
person Pyrefly
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, continue it\'s a nice little ficcy so far. I hope u update soon! ^^ I\'ll be reading!

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