AFF Fiction Portal
GroupsMembersexpand_more
person_addRegisterexpand_more

rate_review Reviews

for Even Better Raw

by LauraDoll

person Crazy4Pirates
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
one of the best i\'ve ever read. . . . . . PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
person acid_bath
schedule August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey very cool story!
i like the scenarios u put them in and the food has a lot of kintenttential!
keep up the great work!!!


^__^

and pls update soon!
person Kiristeen
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL, this was delightful! : )

Kiri
person Valentine
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!!!! GREAT Story.
person Morgana
schedule May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that there is going to be more of this story.I\'m hooked.It is very good.A++++++++++++++ Awesome :O)
person Dusty
schedule April 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What? That\'s it?!

Well it was delicious as it was...even if it was faaaar too short for my liking.

Please continue? ::sad puppy face::
person Ashley
schedule January 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! This is so good! Hurry and add more!
person red_fanngirl
schedule December 30, 2002 at 12:00 AM
wow, I'm amazed at how nicely you worked the sensuality across the story. The pauses, the interleaving of dialogue.... everything was very well done.
I really hope you continue this story. Well Done!
person Lunadeath
schedule December 22, 2002 at 12:00 AM
oooo... i really don't know what to say usually with ones that i really like. you have a really nice way of writing and i love the way you have Harry and Draco interact together. it's so believeable! More soon i hope!
person Xamphira
schedule December 21, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Oh, delicious!
I like your intelligent Draco very much; the whole reasoning behind him leaving the dark side makes beautifully neat sense.
But... you can't end it there. You just can't! I mean, great foreplay, but where's the main event? ;-)

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?

Need Help? Click Here or Try Again