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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter set the stage perfectly. I wish it was longer though. I can't wait for the sequal. Do you have an idea about where you wish to go with the story?
schedule
December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very Confusing. you should make it more clear.
schedule
November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well done. I like the one sided point of view very much.