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for Perfect

by HauntedDreams

person J.
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. Beautifully written. This is some of the best fiction I have read in a long time. Bravo.
Touching, sad, heart-breaking.

Thank you!!

~J.
person mistresskuroi
schedule April 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. So much emotion, so much pain...I truly feel sorry for him. Wonderful piece here, I can see why it would win a prize.
person Jamie
schedule March 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HO...LY... SHIT... Wow. That was just so incredible. I really have no words to describe how that affected me. You are truly a gifted and talented writer. I have no difficulty in believing that this won at least one prize. Utterly amazing. A side of Draco that one wouldn\'t normally think of. But I REALLY liked it. Have you written others like it? I\'m going to go look. Seriously, I am currently sending my friend the link so that she can read it also. The passion in your writing, the subtle undertones,.. everything is amazing. I hope that you continue to use your amazing gift to create more moving stories like this one. The ending was phenomenal.
person ladyparseltongue
schedule March 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God... once again, I am riveted by your story! I actually have tears streaming down my face!
person aphrodite
schedule February 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. sionsion-filled, and strangly beautiful.u aru are a talented writer, thank you so much for adding such an amazing story to this site!
person Zedral Z
schedule January 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It was a nice touch when, in the suicide letter, the phrase 'I was perfect' was repeated. Good story. You were able to weave the beauty with the creepy. I liked it.

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