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by snailexpress

person raija
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best marriage law stories that i have read. And I would be glad if you continued.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chapters 4 & 5... Things are starting to take a bit more shape now!!! ealleally like how the conversation went with Hermione\'s parents, Sev really surprised her a lot!!! After this I would guess that they will be making some effort to learn more about each other which should prove quite interesting!!! Looking forward to more, Deb >^..^<
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I still like this story....I am hoping to see more soon.
person otherside
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooo another challenge response!!! i love your story so far, expessially snapes cool detatchment from the whole thing, and then whipping out that awsome ring for her. i\'m sure he\'ll warm up ;)
person LadyPeregrine
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh he sounds SO enthusiatic. I can\'t wait to see what happens next! And I want to get to the romance! The story sounds fsic sic so far, keep going!
person Tesa
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yay! Another chapter! Poor Sev doesn\'t seem too thrilled about the whole arrangement. I\'m glad you\'ve kept them close to their characters though, as opposed to all in love all of a sudden. Can\'t wait to read up more, even if it\'s after Christmas. I\'ll probably really busy myself! Everybody\'s going crazy with last minute X-Mas shopping!!! Have an awesome X-Mas!
Luv,
TESA
person spaz141
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is going to be slow and painful. Thanks for the update.
person merryday
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Adorable, I love a well written prickly Snape. Both characters are very believable. I can\'t wait to read your next chapter.
person SnapeLover
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Am enjoying this story. Please update regularly!
person e
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
do keep going darling. ive read about 15 of the marriage law challenge tries, a good half of them are complete crap and i didnt finish the first chapter (i was only recently brought into the world of fic and my teacher was a snob, ive read all the best, and only them, until i joined wiktt. i am therefore a snob too)
yours appears promising. i only wish there were more chapters for me to read to simply make my decision that your writing is lovely more concrete. got that?! i want another chapter. gogogo!! *winksandsmilesinfriendlylikeimnotahugebitchandimonlyjokingwiththecrazinessmanner*

xoxo
...me...

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