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by driretlan

person Joelle
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You could use a beta, but that was very pretty. And very original without being unbelivable. Good job!!!
person dave gerecke
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not bad.
spelling and use of words needs to be checked.
See below:
\"Hello Neville, forget the password agen did you?\" asked Dean - see the word agen. Should be again.
But if you write more - I\'d like to read it.
dave

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