rate_review Reviews

Hi again. love the new chapter! Thanx for the personal note, always appreciated ;-)
Love the 8 points to a perfect man, it\'s like you read my mind... strange that lol
can\'t wait for the next installment
xxx

\"Without a shadow of a doubt, he could describe Valentines day in exactly the same manner as his appraisal of his appearance, both were fucking hideous.\"

Awesome Line... Wow!!!!


I love it. I can\'t wait to see where you atake this!!

You can see me but I\'m clapping and whistling! Act 1 was fantastic! Excellant start! Not too short and not too long. Better then how my first ficgoingoing, by far! I didn\'t see too many errors. Nothing that was worse then my own unbetaed chapters and yours is much longer! ;c) I can\'t wait for your next chapter!

Hugs,
Ness

I liked the look of that challenge, and I must say I like the start to this. Poor little severus - just makes you want to hug him, doesnt it?

Nice start and I\'ll look forward to some updates.

Love to see more. Not sure about the title tho...
Severus... yummy.
Hermione... not quite so yummy.
C u on Monday.
xxx