rate_review Reviews

OH MY GOSH!!!! That was a fantastic PWP! I loved it! LOL! I never expected Hermione to use that line on Snape! She was really brave to use that line! WOW!!! You go, girl! That rocked! I made sure to put your story in w/ the other responses so everyone will come and read! I love it, sister! I just cracked up When Susan smacked Ron and then at the end when he and Neville said the was woman enough! I look forward to your next story let me know when it\'s out!

Premise was good. I like some of the lines. The ending line in chapter three was funny. I just think that the challenge was a bit too short. It needs more chase perhaps? And I\'d love to see Neville and Ron go after Susan Bones! I thought that was a good idea! : )

I like it, I like it!!! I LOVE how Hermione shut Ron down about Neville!!! Hoping for more soon!!! Deb >^..^<

this is great.... MMMOOORRREEE please???!!!