AFF Fiction Portal
GroupsMembersexpand_more
person_addRegisterexpand_more

rate_review Reviews

for Forgiven

by carriedemarchi

person somekindofberry
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An unexpectedly abrupt end. Hmph.
person moi
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so good! the blood and... other stuff... was icky though. but i love the last part, when harry and draco\'s mum come. it was excellently written. well done. you should continue in a sequel. i\'d love to see what happens next.
~moi
person chantalmalfoy
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good fic! I loved the part where Draco killed Lucius using the older man\'s own blade.
The only things I would have changed were 1) explained about Narcissa more and 2)
told a little more about Harry and Draco after Draco killed his father.

Don\'t get me wrong. I thought the fic was really good. I was just left a bit wanting at the
end. Maybe you could write a follow-up fic... or something. :)

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?

Need Help? Click Here or Try Again